Awesome one-shot

Gah, that was hot!

This was amazingly written good job love the detail that was put into it ...

I love superman and wonder woman stories between comic issues, it was way better than Diana dancing alone in the comic so I really liked this one and you wrote it very good with detail but not exaggerating as I've read in other fics before. Hope you keep writing more fics in the future and if you decide to write stories between comic issues I'd say you're off to a good start. Lastly, very good portrayal of both Clark and Diana and how Diana can also take charge and make first moves that's very Diana in my opinion. Good Work!

...if this was you're first...where have you been hiding? - maybe that's the kettle calling the pot black, but that was readable in the extreme; (sigh) some people are so gifted with words, to make them work together like that. Clear, concise; explanations of what should be explained, and not much where there shouldn't be; More, please...;}

Very well written, always happy to have more writers bring quality stories. Hope to see more in the future.

For your first foray into fanfic, you did a really good job. I remember the WW club scene after Diana found out that Zeus was her father and that her mother had lied to her for her entire life. Adding Clark was a nice idea.

Good start! Would like to see how Clark and Diana act during their "private time!"

Welcome, lurker! really nice job with your first fic. I enjoyed it and hope to see more from you. Love the tension and the emotion in this one and then the understanding. That Strife.

Very nice. Congratulations on your first story. Hope to see more.

This. Was. Amazing! I loved it!