great job with the story.

Hey it's been so long, it's me Kihala Sisters

Ok, while I know that this particular story has been out for a while and that there have been many other pieces of writing made after this that may show quite a different style of writing, I have to be honest.
Grammar. So many grammar mistakes. It literally took me 15 min to get through this page. Other than that, this is a favorite fanfic concept of mine and I like the way it's going so far. I'll leave another review when I finish the rest of the story; these were just my first impression thoughts.

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Wow! Great story, but I'm kinda disappointed that seshoumaru didn't show up and save her or something. Oh well! I'm gonna go read you sequel now!
C-YA~

Please continue,
Please. I beseech you

Oh My Kami! The feels!

Love how you created the explanation for Yume's powers. That was done with quite a flare.

I love Shippo too much

cool story

Luv thestory but in a way I think ur making fun of Inuyasha lol

I really do not like Sesshomaru:[ fine I have a crush. He's still evil.

Well I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read the sequel. Excellent work. :D

Ok I wasn't going to review this story until I read it all the way to the end but I got to say, I LOVE THIS STORY! Shippo calling Yumi "mom" is just too cute. I always loved that little kid, he can be so sweet sometimes and I think it's kind-of cute when he plays those trick on Inuyasha. He's a sweet and brave little guy. Excellent work on this story so far, I can't wait to what else you have up your sleeve. :D

Is it still a Sesshomaru and Yume pairing in the next sequel