Wow I'm really loving this story so far! I love Blue Dragon and Zola is my favorite character. Please update soon! I need more! .

God, is this Chapter long :O I wont be able to finish it today, but i'll give an half-read review -_-"
Shu is an ass! God I never thought of him like that :O But its not bad, he has a bit the behaviour of Logi in my FFs But Logi is much more polite .
However i like it

Hey everybody! A little update on my part: chapter 5 may take a little while to write, about maybe two more weeks. Mainly because this will be the part of the story that explains Zola-and her parents past, so instead of just going with the flow like I usually do, I'm going to have to take the whole thing and put it all into a bit of a summarized flashback. As a writer, I'm not exactly used to writing short love stories this complex, where it ends in a family being split apart and the life of a main character changed forever. Therefore, it is gonna take some time to plan out every event to make it one of the best Blue Dragon love story you all have ever read! Also, if by the time I'm done writing 'Aren't you Glad to See Me,' I may write the whole story of Mariko and Damien if it's ever requested :-)

Omg I loved this so much! I want to know more about Zola's childhood. - (Honestly cuz no one ever writes about it and you have such a good start with her Mom and Dad just like, ahhh! xD)

I've always had this head canon that Zola had this over protective older brother and I kinda wonder how that would play out. (Thinking out loud. Don't pay attention to me. xD)

I just can't get enough :3 I want to know more about Zolas past :O

Again a great chapter and the flashback at the end is... soooooo cute :3
But I was wondering why there were so many Informations in a library? I mean, about her parents maybe, but about Zola herself? however, I am waiting for more :DDDD

And again: I LOVE THIS FANFIC! *.*

I LOVE THIS FANIFC!

I was thinking about who possibly can be the kidnapper... I do not really know, but I want to *.*

Please keep writing o.O I would be happy if I could read more soon 3

Hey everyone! Sorry for the lack of updates, you see, for the two weeks following my last update I was busy preparing my Halloween costume and doing loads of homework, then this week, I had a really painful ear infection. (OUCH!) Unfortunately, that stopped me from even celebrating Halloween, so I'm really bummed out at the moment. My ear still kinda hurts, but as soon as my doctor says it's ok, I'll try to catch up with my schoolwork and then work on chapter 4!

sorry i cant log in..
the kidnapper is Cynthia right?
just a stupid guess hehe
keep writing!
loving it

This is fantastic! I'm really loving this story so far!

I'm really loving this so far! I would kinda like to see more desperation, anger, and hurt and maybe some of the same on Zola's side too. :)

Hey everyone! So, I just wanted to ask about how you all think of the story so far? I am currently working on chapter three, and I would like to know what I'm missing. Do I need more action? More drama? More anything? Less of something? I know I seriously failed at this in my last comment, but I need to know what you all think! Again, thanks for reading, I'll have the next chappie up soon. Deuces
B-)

Amazing please write more!

so guys, what do you think of my first chapter? Sorry if it's too short, some stuff came up and I was a bit busy, but don't worry, cuz I'm already working on my second chappie! thx guys!

Wow, a bit short, but I like it! Can't wait to read the next chapter!