| Reviews for Don't Stop at Hello |
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   Selena92 chapter 1 . 1/9/2019 Awesome! Jack woukd be an absolute expert in the flirting department. Loved his reaction to the Doctor's request. And the explanation while it's sk hard for the Doctor- good one! |
| Hercules8 chapter 1 . 10/31/2017 Cool story! :D |
| iWriterGirl chapter 1 . 6/12/2017 VERY well written! I really enjoyed that. You write in a way that's exciting and heartfelt and makes people really get into the story. You can't even feel time passing by, what a gift you have! Keep writing! |
| Heather Snow chapter 1 . 7/13/2016 I love how you write Jack. And I love the fact the Doctor went to him for advice. |
| Addicted1 chapter 1 . 2/9/2016 This definitely wasn't crack! Great closing lines. Love the way you write Jack. |
| IsabellaKatherine chapter 1 . 8/31/2015 This was so adorable! Loved it! :) |
| FREYA ASTRID NOVA chapter 1 . 7/4/2015 Please turn it into a fic... PLEASE! 3 ~RIVER 11 SHIPPER |
| Addie Lover of Stories chapter 1 . 3/29/2015 Loved it! You totally nailed everyone! And Jack was hilarious! XD |
| ChiefDoctor chapter 1 . 2/23/2014 Oh that was hilarious. I could just see Jack and the Doctor trying to have this conversation. That would be AWKWARD without a doubt. |
| Duchess67 chapter 1 . 1/14/2014 *vbg* Cute! |
| Mango Marionette chapter 1 . 12/16/2013 I like this fic |
| Qapleulia chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 This is really nice! |
| TimeLordsCompanion chapter 1 . 10/28/2013 This was amazing! Well-written. I love the idea that Jack would help The Doc with River. |
| Kerjen chapter 1 . 10/15/2013 I love this! The fact the Doctor would go to Jack for advice and how much of a bombshell it is. Jack's reaction to RIver's picture and how he knew the Doctor would HAVE a picture. woman, not a girl. How she is a w Then he tried keeping it and the smile at the Doctor snatching it back. Then the lovely way they say Hello, rather like when he finds out she's Melody. Wonderful fun and sweet story. The only thing my fangirl heart might like is Jack to react to River's name - like "THE River Song?!" Like the way Moffat said if he met her and she told him her name, he'd pale like WOW and snap a salute But that's me fangirling; you gave us a perfect story! |
| Orchidellia chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 That was really sweet. Seeing the Doctor vulnerable and slightly ridiculous is nice once in awhile. :) |
