Bethany Parker got kicked out of cherub

Please carry on the series

8/10
I loved the plot just the wording and grammer could have been better

Is it weird I prefer this to actual cherub

Pls carry on

Really good. Loved all the suspense in all the chapters. Once I started reading the first chapter, I couldn’t stop until I finished the whole thing. About to read What If now. Hope there’s even more!

Sorry, but at Gwen and Sam‘s birthday Gabrielles children are 4 and 8 years old. In this chapter they are 14 and 13 shouldn’t they be about 10 or 11 and 14 or 15? And one more question. Did the 4 year old kid Bruce had before die or is the kid just not there?

Shouldn’t Sarah be younger than Martin and shouldn’t Martin be 8 or 9. In the chapter of Gwen and Sam’s birthday, Martin is two years old. This chapter is about 6 1/2 years later.

Two things:
1. James didn‘t use Adams as his last name in the second book. I think he was called James Beckett or something like that.
2. James changed his name to Robert James Choke in the last book. The book was published in 2010.
Apart from that, I love this story.

I just wanted to ask: Isn‘t what Lois did basically raping James?

Wouldn‘t Luke be much older? Lauren turns 18 in the first chapter and James is 3 years older than her. So he is about 21 in the first chapter. James was born in 1991, so Chapter one is probably in 2012. Kerry turned pregnant about short before, so the babies were probably born in 2013. This chapter is 8 years later, when his kids turn 8, so it must be 2021. Therefore James must be 29 or 30 years old. If he impregnated Lois when he was 15 the bany must have been born when he was about 16. So Luke should be 13 or 14.

Sasha Thompson was or still is a male, and Luke's Grandfather not gran

Don,t get were and where confused. Otherwise great fanfiction

Please write some more chapters, I've enjoyed following this book for some time now

do more