write more please this is so fucking good

I'm a little surprised you haven't continued this. It's good.

How can you leave a story like this unfinished? It looks like you don't even try to continue it. Do you need a kick-start or something? Hell, if it would help to finish this I would supply you with some ideas, maybe even parts you don't want to write. Forthe love of god, MAKE MORE!

please continue this - you don't have to write the smut maybe just an angsty romance story - its such an interesting start - and definitely worth developing! well done a good read!

Please continue this book I would LOVE to see how it unfolds and if ruby does get the job or lives with Weiss for her life and I'm starting to think that Blake is the owner of the place. Hmmm... So much it could be. Anyhow PLEAAAASE update.

I do hope your muse inspires you to write more of this. I find it quite intriguing. The only flaw I can find is my own greed for desiring more.

Loved it. You don't need smut either. I personnaly don't look for porn in these stories.
For the writting itself, I don't see much issue. The grammar's great, structure too, style is good. All is good.
One criticism though is for the style of text used for thought. Quotation marks, even if in itallic, can be confusing. I suggest something more along the lines of: 'text', or 'italictext' or just simply italic text without apostrophes.
Oh, I also like your interpretation of the characters (like how you make them act and react). Spot on (in my opinion).
Would like to see more of this. So long, and goodnight.

Ooooh. You should really continue this. I'm more interested in seeing if Ruby gets the escort job, and if she becomes Weiss favorite, and/or if she quits the job to be with Weiss.
Leaving out the smut was in very good taste. It be beyond awkward reading or writing about two peoples first times. And honestly it leaves the story with a better taste toward the end.
The only other thing to note is that you may want to try using something other than quotation marks when someone is thinking, maybe italicize or use single quotes or use - marks at the ends of thoughts, just to leave the reader with less room for confusion. Other than that, your grammar is spot on.
All in all you should totally continue this. It would be amazingly amazing.

Please continue!

Hmmmm... I am interested. Update soon. Thanks -.

This is a really interesting concept for an AU. Fairly original. I'm not bothered when you comment on an apparent absence of smut, because that's not what I primarily look for in a story. I look for something that catches my eye, whether it involves a lemon or not, and the summary of this concept was definitely one that caught my eye, so I hope to see this continue.

nice story can't wait for the rest of it. Stinks that you can't write smut... You should try outsourcing it someone who could.

Second chapter?

Poor Ruby and Yang, forced to be escorts for money. Oh well, it could be a lot worse. Lol I wonder if Blake is one Yang's customers?
Update soon!

This story is off to a great start. I found the characters matched perfectly, and the situation of it all rather humorous. As another reviewer said, don't feel pressured to write smut if you don't feel comfortable. Write what you're good at. You're doing a wonderful job so far. :)