| Reviews for Temptation |
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  Guest chapter 3 . 9/30/2017 This is great! Loved it to bits! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/15/2015 Great job with this fic! Loved how you grew their relationship over time, and the fact that they had mutual respect for each other! Keep writing, fantastic job! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/15/2015 You've gotta be kidding me... |
 fritzo chapter 3 . 12/25/2014 WOW! I truly enjoyed that, so much. It was such a wonderful read... I read again right after. I loved how you developed their relationship from passing acknowledgment to admiration & from teacher/student to respected equals. I also like how well they worked w/each other on their run, know the others moves w/out having to think... just react. The only thing I could complain about... is that's it! You REALLY need to do a continuation (part 2) or something, this is just to good to stop. I loved it! Please, more. |
| Aguuus chapter 3 . 10/28/2014 Oh my god I enjoyed your piece of art. I hope you are writing other ff. Im gonna check out that. |
| fancyfaye chapter 3 . 10/19/2014 Excellent writing. Love team BETHYL! |
| CaliforniaDreamin03 chapter 3 . 10/12/2014 I loved this story! This week the Walking Dead Marathon was on AMC and I decided to watch it and it was awesome & I too fell in love with Bethyl! Great fic from a great writer! |
| sheriffandsteel chapter 3 . 7/27/2014 This was extremely well written and very cute! |
| Kioko chapter 3 . 7/14/2014 I just finished the season 4 of WD, and I fall in love with the darylxbeth pairing . I really enjoyed your fanfic ,thank you ! |
| ZombertHunter chapter 3 . 7/1/2014 Loved it! |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 2 . 5/27/2014 ooohh! i am having flashbacks gor episode 13 'alone' damn! him training her and she uses his crossbow! the tension! wow! the song was perfect! |
| emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 1 . 5/27/2014 so cute! go bethyl! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/28/2014 It would've been too cliche if you'd included love confessions. Perfect ending. Although I love a more talkative Daryl, most often fanfic writers make him much more articulate than he is in the show. He generally communicates with looks and nods, and the occasional phrases in his Southern drawl. Wordless communication is tough though, so I completely understand. Best wishes! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2014 I like your style but the men trial thing is really corny |
| Angelus Erreare chapter 3 . 4/1/2014 Wow, that was superbly written; not an ounce of OOCness. At all. The progression that the relationship had gone through was brilliantly thought out. And what the best of all this is, the simple and emotionally-charged kiss. Your story was done with so much finesse and elegance that the whole emotional integrity of the reader can be undone with but a simple kiss. Amazing. |
