cool chapter

Geart Chapter

Hello Shiue, I'm Kai. I'm the one who reply your comment on Five-fic-First in Infantrum.
I do hope you're OK with that (sometimes I'm quite sharp, hope you can get used to it. If you feel uneasy with my comments, just forget it)

I'm also a newbie in FFN, however I also pay attention to INA fanficcers who wrote in English. I salute them. Including you. I read this fic and it brought me to some memories about my teenagers where I used to see Sailormoon. However, that was past, the more I grow up, I became more logical and choose more realistic anime/manga/story instead. I'm a bit jealous to you who still able to live in those cute animes, it seem cheerful and pure. Coz I stand in a very different extreme. But that's no problem.

BTW Shiue, If I can give you sugestion, that will be that this kind of anime usually lack of internal conflict. It only covers external conflict, merely abot relationship between each characters. The nuances of how they heart saying, how they think, how they feels, how they managed fear, spirit, dreams and hope in their soul, ... those kind of things are rarely stated. I found the same pattern in your fic. So, to make it special as a fic, If I can request, add some internal conflict.

You may PM me in English too, I'm quite familiar with that language, but not as brave as you to publish an English fic... (I've tried but the result is embarassing)

regards,
Kai

ok, so... Doremi is the reincarnation of not only one, but two royal witches, the Ojamajos are Majo Senshi, and Dremi has three sisters(two reincarnated and one biological)?

things are going to become weirder, isn't it? oh, well! this will be good!