I have throughly enjoyed reading this crazy fun story! Thanks very much for finishing it!
Would love to read more of your stories, your writing is great and very true to the characters we know and love.

I loved it! Very original and i loved how you captured the Voyager crewmember's personalities in the holedeck characters. I will have to explore you other works.

I started this just before you posted the final chapters, so my timing was perfect. What a dense, satisfying romp, from start to finish. The complicated plot, Voyager canon, wonderfully-drawn characters-you tie it together so seamlessly. Bravo! Added to favorites.

( chaping , cearing, hooting)
Brillant just brillant a wonderful end to a wonderful story and I'm sad to see it go as this was one of the frist fan fictions I really liked. Sigh it's being an amazing ride thank you for creating such a wonderful story.

Though I'm not the biggest noir fan I quite injoyed this siting if only the righters of STV had your talent and Vision then session seven would be such a Custer bome of failure and STV would be remembered far more favourable but sigh a fan boy can merly dream.

I have to emit that after everything that's happend that the voyager crew solved all the ships issues in less than five hours is a little much but hay it was all right just a little flaw.
And I did raze a eye brow at tovok still have Borg stuff in his brain but I can buy it.
I do like how you finely addressed Seska program but I can't be a good I dear to have an insane AI hologram run around out thier. Janeway, janeway what are we going to do with you.
And why am I not surprised that her mouther is nuts too.

I do have to question that crew member what's her face takeing the Borg baby. Why wouldn't seven look after her? She knows more about Borg stuff then anyone. Though come to think of it I doubt seven would hardly havering four kids ( all of whom have being mind fucked by the Borg ) and a baby and then thier seven thing about staying in the cargo bay, not the best way to raze. A baby.

I also love the end bits of seven/ choaktay though I do have to question if janeway gave him the nudge here then why the wtf reaction in endgame by the way you have righten janeway in this story and others it just seems like she shouldn't go wtf at 7/c in endgame
But nit pick all of the this was great I only wish my story's and righting were anywhere as good as yours.
9.8/10 a few flaws but a truely epic and wonderful shorty

And please don't leave us weeeeeeeeeeee nnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeddddddddssssssss

A brilliant, light-hearted, witty ending to a fun rollercoaster of a story! :)

You managed to get at least two references to the 'We'll always have Paris' line, I laughed at Seven's twist on it 'We'll always have the week in Mr Paris' programme...' Lol. And then the characters bewailing how often the holodeck tried to kill them... It was twisted genius to have Tuvok *actually* be able to meld with the 'holographic paperweight' because of the residual Borg technology, no wonder he was mentally broken in the Endgame timeline...

And you didn't shunt the background characters back into obscurity for the last chapter, I appreciate that, and B'Elanna finding the Seska programme again in the Delta Flyer... Well, they're shot of her now, her cousin will just have to deal with his holographic crazy relative...

Thanks for writing! :D

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AMAZING! First, before I say anything else... 'Bad Vulcan!' ROFL! XD! I go into hysterics even after reading anything referring to Tuvok in this chapter, even after reading it through three times! Him trying to do a mind-meld...on the STATUE! Neelix opining that it didn't really matter if it had a Vulcan attached to it as long as they got it out of the holodeck... OMG, lol. When Naomi threw the bid through the air, 'like a football', I pictured the scene in slow-mo, with 'Chariots of Fire' as the backing music... And then Seska had to die just before it crossed the threshold. Damn.

Not that I'm annoyed that Seska is dead, it was seriously cathartic. You outdid yourself with the dialogue in those scenes, between B'Elanna and Seska and Chakotay and Seska, just the right blend of over the top to make her completely crazy, while still explaining her deranged rationale. As always, I loved that you addressed plot-holes, just as B'Elanna's OOC behaviour in S2 and what exactly Seska's motivation was... You described Chakotay so well here, finally snapping and letting the beast he reins in like a 'holier than thou sh'throt' out. The way he manually held Seska's head under the water until she drowned, yeah, that suited the situation.

There was so much in every scene, Harry calling Tom out on kissing Doc B'Elanna, Janeway quickly exchanging her lost fiancé for coffee and saying what we've all thought at times, 'Why do they bother with holodecks?' Well, we saw how twisted those Equinox folk got with just those visor-thingies...

Thanks so much for writing! :D I really wasn't expecting such a quick update, not that I'm complaining, so thanks for that too. I'm looking forward to seeing how this ends, with that epilogue, it's been such a fun read!

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(chapping and cheering) on core on core
every thing I said in the last review and more, this was utility brillante fanatic, epic, tragic so many feels being felt my heart is betting like a war drum.

you know I have come to a resection about Seaka you can't hate her, she just paretic, she this bitter lonely woman who feels nothing but hate for every thing but you know what the most ironic thing about her is I think she hates her self more then every one else why else would she care to make plan after plan why would she still care? because she hates herself, for falling for a human, for befriending a half Klingon and Bajoran to actually careing about people she was bet to spy on and kill. I think she was unconvict with in her self in till she just snapped. all that hate, all that venom all that genus she's just a lost soul.

I can see why people often like seven to seska but were seska gave in to the dark seven never did. but hay that's just me.

and out of the frying pan into the fire
and at last I have final fingered out were this story sits, in session 7. some time after human error but before Q2.
if only the righters on STV had some one nearly as talented as you righting story's working on STV then it would be remembered much more fondly.
but atlas a fan boy can mealy dream
this was truly epic and wonderful, I have enjoyed this ride and im sad to see it end.
Yours Alaster Boneman
btw what are your feelings on Namoi/ Icheb? just wondering

WOW! I LOVED it! The violence was awesome, maybe a weird thing to say, but it was certainly more clever and funny than disturbing for sure! It definitely made me think of the 'Godfather' scenes, and Quentin Tarantino movies too... You used the 'background' characters amazingly, really bringing to life what they might well have been thinking as they got revenge on holograms of Voyager's multiple enemies, Andrews' bitter thoughts about Janeway forgiving Ransom were a particular stand-out, as were Ayala's scenes. Just brilliantly done all-round... I'm really glad they called the Doctor out on his hypocrisy where sentient holograms are concerned too.

I really like Naomi and Sam's dynamic here, and the running joke of what Icheb and Naomi have been learning from Seven and Neelix... And then there was the multiple cameos, which you tied in really well with Sam having lived on DS9, that was all just priceless! LOL. XD

And all that action was not only fun and thwarting Seska, it's going to help the senior officers wake up! I'm impressed! This is silly, but that's why it's SO good, because it also makes sense in it's own silly context.

Thanks so much for writing! :D

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(chapping and cheering)
brovo , brovo (wissel)
( I knew and bow at you)
that was fanatic absolutely fanatic, your are a mad genus dear lady and I bow your awesome niss. for 18 chapters that bitch seska has had the upper hand and in one chapter when the things were at their darkest you brought us the dawn it wont be long before Seska falls and falls hard it time for some Ghost Busting and im feeling good.
this chapter was truly a masterpiece. I loved every thing in this chapter
from the Lord of the rings and Game of thrones refances to the blood path of death you have created (hail sithis)
to the utter insanity of all the guests of trek past.

brovo you are my hero.

only two things could make this story even better if some how you worked in a evil dead/ army of darkniss refance (hopeing hear as you will never find a bigger fan than I of those two movie/ comic/ awesomeness) that would be must GROVY!
and seven and Chakotay having a kiss (more likely)
btb would love it if you got seven or was it anna? don't care... to kill Seska once and for all.
an

and my god what did you do to Namoi and Icheb? it was brillante the Stanger watch over your friend.
and to horror Leonard Nimoy live long and prosper
Your humble fan Alaster Boneman

More!
Please finish this soon, can't wait to see what happens.
I've been on the edge of my seat for days reading this (partly hoping tom got a few more injuries so that I could take care of him).
Please update soon x

This hasn't been a story that I could sit down and read in one go, but it's continually drawn me back in. The twists and turns you've put into this have my head spinning. You are weaving one heck of a tale! Keep it going strong to the end! Can't wait to see how they get out of all this.

That was absolutely the best thing to do with Boothby. No offence to the actor or anything, but why multiple Trek writers kept bringing him into plots always escaped me. I actually really enjoyed the multiple switches, especially with the audience in Engineering, I felt like they were expressing what us readers are thinking in a much more humorous way than I could manage. Ooh, Chakotay and Seven going off on a revenge hunt... ;) Loved that line where Annie interpreted what Charles intended to do to Seraphine and wanting to help him.

So much gold in here, the Pepsi product placement (always have preferred it to Coke, lol) comments the confusing multitude of Harry's non-descript girlfriends, Captain Braxton's alter ego, Tuvok and Vorik... Just all brilliant! :D

Thanks for writing! :D

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Color me intrigued! As soon as I saw the synopsis I was interested and after reading chapter 1, I'm hooked.

Why to you hate booth be what's wrong with you? This chapter was amezing god dame amezing this is utter perfefection great job cheese this is a masterfully story and chapter. One thing I have said this befor in my reviews of this story and I'll more than likely say it again but. Janeway is a trekking trit she just up a believes ransom after he has try end to jut her like a fish! My god how this woman get command of a franking star ship she isn't fit to lead a pub craw. I can't believe I'm going to say this but bellia from twlight is less of a complet Mooron than janeway and saying that makes me fell dirty.
Yours Alaster Boneman

Hi,
Just wanted to say how much I am loving this fic!
You are a fantastic writer!

It's interesting that you just revealed that the drugs/booze is real coz I was already thinking that when they finally rescue the crew from the holo deck Tom's going to have one serious hangover! (He's my current tv crush right now so any stories involving him are good for me)

If you need proof of how much I like the story, I actually bothered to go and locate my password for this site so I could review properly, mostly I will only post anonymously or just think to myself, what a great story. You should be flattered.

Please do keep up this great tale and write more stuff soon.