You said only 13-18 yr olds were eligible. You also said that Katniss was eligible. But didn't you say Katniss was 12?

do u not know Deadlox's real name? it's Ty. hold on, y is Kermit in this?! XD

lol that my little pony reference. I like how celestia is a stylist

I hope you know I'm not paying you.

Nice chapter.

I LOVE KIARA'S POV!

More description.
And don't bunch up the test leik...
"Hi I'm Aideen." And then something. "I'm Kiara."

Do it liek:
"Hi I'm Aideen."
And then something.
"I'm Kiara."

Yeahz.

Anywayz...
Great chaptarrr

WOOT! Shout out!

ANYONE ELSE NOTICE VYNIL, CELESTIA, AND TWILIGHT?! Love the story, keep going! Mind if I pm you an OC?

I don't know who i choose to win! Either Jordan, Sky, or BajanCanadian! Argh! :P
Nice chapter by the way.

Nice start. :) Just a suggestion: Maybe you could skip a line whenever a character is saying something new. For ex. (just making this up):

Ginna saw the birds fly around the park. "Beautiful, isn't it, Cara?" She smiled.

"Yes, it is." Cara smiled and hugged her younger sister.

...

It kind of confused me reading this, but either way, it was nice! Btw, do you plan on adding Prim or Gale or the other characters as well? :D

- Kay

Kiara's POV.
We need freaking Kiara-ness.
Kay.

That is NOT a question.
THATISANORDER

This is great so far! :)

"Whoopity f*ckin doo", LAWL, That always gets me xD

i told jordon to read this idk if he saw it though

*waggles eyebrows*

Is this Misty and Jordan Mare all over again?
*continues waggling eyebrows*

OoOoOooOoooOOo

Continue on.