It's incredible how a smutty fanfiction can belong to the cutest things you've read in a while!
Maybe it is the contrast between the original, usually pretty cruel series and this romance centered story that adds up to making it so extraordinarily lovely.

I love your way of both describing actions and feelings. A story with physical content only wouldn't nearly be as entertaining and capturing.
Your writing style is simply amazing!

This review does not show how excited I am in the least. I must apologize - writing in English is still a difficult task for me.

Anyway, you're starting to convince me of this couple. Eren and Levi.. haha. Who would have thought I'd end up as a yaoi fangirl again. (It's always the same.)

Thank you very much for sharing this sweet fanfiction.
Greetings from Germany
ChiE77173

Sexy, witty, and accurate. You have just become a role model.

Continue! :D

OHMIGOD DAT WAS SO HOT

how is this complete?! there needs to be a sequel!

I looove your stories! They're so descriptive and you get the characters' personalities so well! Please make a continuation to this! :D

I like it very much! :D

This is probably the best I've read of this pairing so far, good job! I enjoyed it. :)

YELLS THIS WAS SO GOOD YOU HAVE A LOT OF TALENT

Very steamy and nicely written! Just watched all the anime for the first time today and I gravitated towards this pairing. I'm pleased to have found this nice little one shot to satisfy my curiosity lol Hope there are similar works out there that can do the same! Nicely done!

Totally hot... straight on to the next!
EvilMidget6;)

Word escape me right now and probably for the next few minute . . . very hot story!

:-)

This is such a well-written, in-character story. I love it, and look forward to reading more from you. I laughed a few times (“your face in my way” lol!) and was amazed at the things they said in others, all still amazingly in-character. This story was sexy, interesting, and beautiful, just like this couple. I could picture their facial expressions very well and you did an immaculate job at description and dialog. I loved seeing how well you understand these two as characters and as a couple. The combination of determined and timid Eren, and blunt, dangerous, and openly vulnerable Levi- it was all so perfect.
I would suggest asking someone to proofread your stories before you post them, as I saw quite a few careless mistakes in terms of typos throughout the story. It wasn’t too terribly distracting most of the time, but I do think the excessive typos, while inevitable (and forgivable if kept to minimum), look unprofessional and take away from your story’s power.
I was surprised by, and loved, that Levi kissed Eren on the cheek before he left him. The combination of give and take throughout the story is so fitting for their relationship, and interesting to read in its unconventionality. I also loved how you brought back the ‘pain is a good way of training’ idea. The ending bodes well for the sequel. –wink-
Well done!
Grade: High A and a Favorite

Aww yes ;D Your writing astounds me. So flawless. I adore your characterization of these two. Bravo!

ooooh my. . . . i know this is listed as complete but. . . . i think it would be veeeeery interesting to see what levi has in store for the chains in eren's cell XD