Actually you can adopt a child if your single theres no law saying you can't

that was an enjoyable fic

Very funny

good start i like it

Is this incomplete? I ask because this chapter seems to literally have no connection with the other four.

I'm waiting for Sarah to explain to Marcus that he has very little intuition and that, if he can't see that Mindy is crushing on Dave and vice-versa, he really needs to up his situational awareness a little.

This was an awesome story. I hope you are thinking of doing a sequel to this.

Sam

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I enjoyed your story.

Excellent story. Very readable. Smooth. I've been avoiding reading other KA stuff because I hate the idea of copying someone else's idea but I'm glad I made the excepetion. Really fun adding in a wife for Marcus and great job of keeping the feeling between them growing slowly instead of just popping out of nowhere.

i love this pair. how it started with friendship, with the girl mentoring the boy and progressed into something more. it reminded me of my otp.

That was really cute!

So gay Dave again? I wonder how they'll explain that to Sarah. I also wonder how things will change since the the end is different. Will she get caught? What's next?

Great story. :)

First of all thanks for updating this story. I've read chapters 3,4 and 5 and I like them since they're well written but Makokam have some good points.

I mean, the whole shopping thing it's a bit too long and detailed and clearly shows that Mindy has more than a crush for Dave. It would have been nice to see some of the scenes from Mindy's view too. The whole gay Dave very funny.

My fave chapter so far is number 5 but seems like there's something missing from the previous ones. Feels like there's a gap or some facts missing. Chapter 5 could be an individual story for it's own just with a bit of introduction.

Anyway, good story, well written and loved chapter 5 and Dave and Mindy interaction. I can totally picture them acting like that.