Woah ! I really love this story ! The most funniest thing was the moments between Zoro and Robin ! They are so cute together
Also I love how much Zoro is so protective with his family !
I'm so happy for Naruto to have a great and cool family like that !
Really constructive story.
Hope you keep writing those kind of story

uhm Gaara only has ONE kid and isn't married as the kid is ADOPTED. Also I'm not sure he fits with Olivia as I'd rather not see her go the route of Robin and marry someone who's more braun than brain. Honestly if Shika could get motivated I'd honestly be able to see her with him as he's got the brains and if he could get motivated instead of sticking to being lazy I could see him being pretty strong. Actually as I'd prefer the mix of strong and smart an since Haku is supposedly a male in canon have him come back to Konoha an have Olivia end up with him as he's got quite a bit of strength seeing as he beat Sasuke pretty easily and he's also smart as he's proven with knowledge of herbal medicine and of the human body

Thank you to let us know.
You dont know how happy i'm to see this beautiful fic continue.

ok good to know that this story isent dead.
i like this story and i want to continue to read it.
i am a old fan so this is were happy new for my, :)
have a nice day.

Beautiful. This chapter is beautifully written. The pacing is excellent, not too fast but not slow either. The interaction between Robin and Naruto has so much emotion. Robin's own connection to him through their shared pain is clear and powerful. You were deadly accurate with Zoro's personality. And Olvia is an impressive blend of both her parents!

I'm especially impressed with how you depicted Naruto and the setting as well. I don't enjoy fanfics that depicted Naruto being physical assaulted or abused. He experienced emotional trauma and neglect from adults, but not physical injuries apart from just being moderately pushed-around or accidental incidents. A situation like this is perfectly accurate with Kishimoto's work. Also, his reaction to Robin's care is absolutely beautiful. I actually teared-up a bit as I read it. And Robin's reflection on her past and her commitment to saving Naruto from that kind of life.

The comment about Zoro being afraid of an in-labour Robin was also brilliant!

Awe man, I want to read more.
If it does get adopted please inform us.

Shikamaru.

good. if you decide to rewrite this or if some adopts this, please tell me.

Good story it's such a shame that you gave up on it.

please tell me who adopts this

let me know who adopts this

The thing that doesn't sit well with me in that Zoro and Robin's child, Olivia, is the daughter of very notorious pirates. In One Piece pirates are the epitome of liberty, they don't obey to anyone not even the World Government.
At chapter 3 you made Olivia a shinobi, which means a soldier of Konoha. As such she will be expected to obey the Hokage (or Danzo). The idea that Zoro and Robin willingly gave their 12 years old daughter to someone they don't know isn't really the best idea for me. I would have think that they would give more thought to it, that they would wait to know more about the Hokage and the village as a whole. Because if Olivia become a shinobi, she is expected to value the villa above all else (hello Itachi). Now i know the goal of your story is to give naruto a family and awesome sword techniques, but I don't like how your Fanfic began.

Hi! I just started reading and it's fantastic so far! I think you should do the bell test!

Yes

Hi, first of all, i really like this fic you doing a great job. Second of all i think you should do bell test.(sorry for my bad english)