Reviews for Sari Broken Fall: Departure From Earth |
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![]() ![]() Please update soon! It's reeeeeeeeeely good! |
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![]() ![]() more plz :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sari's dead? I don't think that fall would have killed Optimus... damaged him yes, possibly quite severely, but not kill him. Sari on the other hand... even with Optimus taking the initial impact there's still the impact of her hitting his armor as he hits the water, the shock of how cold the water is, the amount of time she can actually stay underwater without need for air, and several other variables to take into account. So between Prime and Sari, it's most likely Sari that died... can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Why...why...why in the name of Primus do you do this to us!? ;-; My heart just shattered into a bajillion pieces ;-; |
![]() ![]() Plz revive Optimus prime plz :) |
![]() ![]() OMP! You need to update! |
![]() ![]() Update soon please ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh... not Prime again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE |
![]() ![]() ![]() ? wait... what about primus? do you mean the same primus from TC? what's he got to do with anything? O.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a really awesome story cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good thing Sari is healing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, please please post another chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... this just got a little funky! Can't wait for the update. |