Oh my gosh, so cute!

I loved how the pack was so protective of Stiles- even Jackson! The plot was actually pretty interesting, but it was hard to appreciate because of all the writing errors. I suggest working on sentence structure (run-on sentences) and formatting (separating dialogue from each other mostly) as a start. Elaborating further on events (writing more detail about what actually happened so the reader can "see" and relate to the event more) is also something to keep in mind. You have the makings of a great author, and I look forward to reading your stories as you improve.

yea great story

That was so adorable! Omg 33