Reviews for Mass Effect: Out of Shadow |
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shadow chapter 23 . 7/5/2017 I liked the chapter! |
Guest chapter 23 . 10/30/2015 I... Am confused yet highly entertained. |
trninjakiller chapter 7 . 3/24/2015 This just became a parody. I HATE PARODIES. |
Hachichiyyin chapter 1 . 7/10/2014 Ridic' |
jabbarulez chapter 23 . 6/27/2014 shepard killed the council? you just fulfilled many a gamers dream! |
Nas4a2 chapter 23 . 6/7/2014 This story is getting way to funny can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. |
gasacan90 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014 Love it keep up the great work |
Nas4a2 chapter 22 . 6/3/2014 I love this story it is funny as hell. I can't wait for more keep up the great work. |
Generatedname chapter 21 . 5/29/2014 Mmmh... This story kind of changed into a form that I personally don't really like. Rather than wasting time flaming it, I would just like to wish you luck in appealing to your intended audience. |
SigmaPsiSin chapter 20 . 5/28/2014 I rather like this, the maniacal craziness... even Bob. Go Team Psychotic! Is it bad I read Bob Shepard as a Deadpool? I've never read or watched bionical... maybe I have. It eludes me if so. As of right now focus a bit more on your si/oc and shepards crew-flesh them out a bit more and not in a bob way. Anyways, this fic made my day and if you continue writing the story as the way it is, I'll continue reading. If you want an OC. Give me a call! www |
Generatedname chapter 1 . 5/28/2014 Interesting. A few grammar corrections and it'll be perfect. I always missed Bionicle. Not enough fics on it here. |
A simpel Sin'dore chapter 19 . 4/23/2014 Makuta has Insect control and can command the Rachni. so it willbe a easy mission. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/10/2014 Most of that sounds a bit stupid to me, so I won't be continuing. Good luck with your writing though. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2014 Not only is there absolutely no normalcy to begin with, the friken Makuta? really? and they are allowed? they were literally made to be over-rated and overpowered children's playthings. This story is so very very messed. this story suffers from lack of limits. what good is a character that has no emotions, is indestructible, and because of these things is insane, or is it that you yourself are insane. Insane flesh goliaths? undying machines? a ghost character that you neglect? plot holes that swallow the universe. Nihlus is forgotten as soon as he boards the Normandy. Shepard is normal, then bi-polar, and then normal again Tali doesn't care that she was knocked out and kidnapped zombies to many damn powers story changed dramatically leading me to believe that the author has lost control of account or just decided to skrew us all over. |
ultimate idiot chapter 18 . 4/8/2014 this story got really weird. |