What’s the point of giving telepath powers if she doesn’t use them. It’s go a pointless plot point and angst for your author fiat, honestly I can just see you setting it up to deus ex machina in the future. It’s such an annoying cliche

Seriously? Alexandria and Eidolon are planning to pass on a earth-wide range telepath just because... because? Someone who might be just about as useful as Contessa, or maybe even more?

Did you even think about what you wrote for a single second? Yeah yeah, drama and all, but you can't turn off logic when you write stories.

Wow I really like this version of Emma. The friend who saves Taylor from the depression of being tortured at such a young age. This chapter was very well writte,.

And I honestly hate that she doesn't use her power whatsoever. Moderation is a thing, and she is setting herself up to get hurt this way. Her mother forced a 10-year-old to make a bullshit promise and she is going to suffer for it.

All that . . . and we're supposed to believe Bonesaw didn't fix her eyesight? I call bullshit.

Just an FYI Frankenstein was the name of the doctor. The monster was named monster or Frankenstein's Monster.

I hate "Vix" so much. Everything I hate about teenagers in one character practically.

I would abuse the fuck out of being a telepath though.

I liked chapter 1 and 2 but I felt 3 was a mess. Very inconsistent use of the telepathic power. The whole point of getting a disguise was to use it but then all the angst of using it? Then there's how they fought. Lung's power is well known: either take him out quickly or run. So they chose to simply keep hitting him with no plan. Hanged man now, his powers are are still nebulous but Taylor knew he reflects damage. So, of course, she punches him in the face. I don't see how that guy is even a threat unless he's got something major under wraps. Containment foam days hello!

Trigger events are not a common knowledge in Wormsverse. Yaaawwwwwnnn. :(

The way you wrote Legend here so reminds me of the Whatever happened to the man of tomorrow Superman and it works so well.

Interesting story and chapter!

just so petty and boring... i get you have emotional issues but who wants to read about a weak pathetic girl who only gets weaker at every turn please someone do her a favor and blow her fucking head off

Can't wait for more!

Cool storys I thor the ch1 from the time to try geting back to hur mum/dad was a Big let down the rest of the fic was cooooooooooool

Very nice.