Was he talking about making kids with her?

This has been my favorite piece involving Makishima and Akane. You personified his character perfectly capturing his charisma and interest. I always thought that if he ever met Akane again he would be interested in her thoughts and reasoning as well.
A delightful read, thanks! :)

so good more please

continue please

Oi oi.. are you gonna update it? I like it and it is very interesting to my own liking

How? It's damn good, witty and well thought with excellent pacing, no grammar/spelling errors that caught my eye at first glance, and is totally in character. What's there to be displeased with, exactly? Fantastic job! Is there going to be anymore added on, perhaps, please?

Ri-Ryn