Hermoine, just stick to being smart. Not jokes. Well, we know that Ginny's and Ron's mind can go to the gutter very quickly. Come on, what is Harry going to do? Sirius!

That's right Ginny, burn in jealousy. Lol Ron kinda reminds me of someone from your other fic :P
This is going good and Dinah is kinda funny.
I'll be waiting for the next and Keep it up!

It's original though I fear twilight references or a crossover.

One thing though:"She's a Muggle-born." Hermione said simply" How can an auror's daughter be a muggleborn? She can be a half blood but since she has an auror for a father, a muggleborn status is impossible.

This is going to be interesting. I like the Harry x Hermoine aspect. I originally thought that was what was going to happen. It's going to be awkward when Cedric comes back.

Reading this first chapter, i have 3 things to say.
a) you must delete Ron's name since this is H/H. If you don't know how to do it, you go to your account then Publish/ManageStories/click on this story and then you delete Ron's name.
b) it's clearly crossover so you must change the category. I don't really understand why you keep calling it as a non-crossover when it is. There are many people who reads HP/Twillight crossover. It's nothing to be ashamed of.
c) i don't really understand how magical and non-magical people can have the same classes since most classes at Hogwarts require magic and a wand, but if you think you can make it then good luck.

While this story has an interesting beginning, it would be difficult to have a good story based on this concept.

But if you succeed in getting everything together well, then it would be so interesting.

This is because Potter and Twilight world's vampire and werewolves may be different. The role they play in society is different. The attitude of the people toward them are different. The powers of the vampires, like whether or not they have super-speed or can stay in sunlight has to be defined.

All these factors needs to be accounted for nicely for a story to work well.

So hopefully you can put everything in the story together nicely.

Mmm, using the exact same characters in their exact same roles with their exact same capabilities in a single universe? That sounds like a crossover to me.

Remove Ron's name from this harmoanian shit you idiot!

I like the chapter

Well, I sure am stoked to see this fic up and about! I've been waiting for a while to find a good Harry Potter fic.
First off, this should be crossover, however, its understandable, since the title reads HARRY POTTER. Apparently, those other readers of yours have zero brains to read the title. Who gives a shit if it isn't crossover? That doesn't make the story less awesome than it is. And whos gonna force you to change it to a crossover? Definitely not these mooks.
Second, love the dynamics of H/Hr. though the dialogue could have been much longer, its still good anyways.
Third, there is a plothole concering it, but i guess it could be explained further. Another thing, if people can't stand to even wait for the next chapter, dont mind them. Theyre too dumb to comprehend anything anyway.
Fourth, although Twilight sucks donkey balls, I love how you implemented the twitards into the story. Especally with jake kicking dudleys fat ass. Epic as hell.
Anyway, I do hope to read the next chapter. Hope your next wave will have some brains to actually read the story. See you soon.

Is there a reason of why you added Ron in the characters? Yes, he might play an important role but the main pair is H/Hr. Just because gives you the liberty to add as many characters as you want, doesn't mean it's necessary to do it. Please remove Ron's name and leave only H/Hr.

I don't know what your definition of crossover is, but this story is definitely one. You're going to use characters from another book so that means it's crossover. End of story. And you need to place this story under the crossover section.

As for the story now. It's well written with nice use of vocabulary, but your story starts with a huge plothole. Even if Hogwarts started accepting werewolves and vampires, that means that they are going to start from year 1. Under what explanation, some teens are just going to enter as 5th years when they haven't got the proper education? And how they are going to follow DADA or Charms or Potions (wand is necessary for all three classes)? Or they are going to have their own classes? If that's the case why even bother to bring them to Hogwarts? See what I'm talking about?

If you're using Twilight cast, then it is a crossover even if it only takes place in the HP world, so you must remove your story to the right category.

Good starting chapter. It has the same awesome feel of your other stories. Werewolves in hogwards would be awesome and brilliant thinking about Cedric, transforming him into one.
Glad this is Harry x Hermione, I love that pairing I would loved to see Harry punching Dudley but he did save his ass.
Vernon's character was terrifically done ! I laughed so hard.
Keep it up Cipher.