Aww... it's nice he found his brother.

They'd be great brothers. I wish this was canon!
XOXO
/Ever/

Please continue this? Pretty please? With a chocolate frog on top?

Aww that was so cute!

I really enjoyed this little story... I love Harry and Neville stories... Thank you

Um, ok. I can see your not a fan of Ron, but it's still a bit oc with the characters.
Nice attempt however.

This is a great story. I like that Harry and Neville were such close friends at such a young age and then remember each other years later. It's very sweet and you tell it in a very nice way. Overall, this is a well written story.

You're a talented writer and if you are interested in writing more you should check out this Harry Potter role play site I belong to called Sonora Academy. The address is www . sonoramagic . net (without the spaces). You can submit a character now or play in our sandbox. If you have any questions, you can ask them on our OOC board or send an email to the head at sonora . academy . head gmail . com (again without spaces) or PM me.

Good luck on your writing!

That was nice.

Will there be more to this story ?

The Crimson Mage.

That was a tear jerker at the end, but a great story and well written.
Thank you :)
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