That was an incredible story. I power-read it all in one night, and it's nothing less than stellar. Perhaps not quite in keeping with the spirit of A Song of Ice and Fire, given that there was a happy ending, but I'm not in much of a position to care ;). Every part of this story fits perfectly, as though George R.R. Martin himself had written it. Or rather, his twin brother who isn't a sadist. All jokes aside, I simply wish to reiterate my statement: this is the single best story I've ever read in the ASoIaF universe save only the books themselves.

That was lovely. I really liked the bit at the end about how the realm basically forced Jon to take the throne ;)

Interesting start! Can't wait to see where it goes ! :)

Love the ending, it was remarkable, well done:)

The quote is from Harry potter and the goblet of fire, hermione said it to Ron when he and Harry were trying to find dates for the Yule ball.
The odd things one remembers sometimes...wow. Anywho excellent so far, can't wait to continue reading. I think Arya as responsible is a bit ooc, but still fascinating to read.

Loved this story it was amazing, the ending was perfect with Gendry getting recognize as a Baratheon. Thank you for writing it and for introducing me to Arya and Gendry fan fiction, hope to read more from you.

Just read this all and enjoyed it. Impressive writing skills and an interesting take on future events. That ending "IF we should ever have a child..." is just crying out for more though, don't you think?

Thanks for entertaining us!

Lovely ending to a fantastic story.
Since I'm treading new ground in an unfamiliar fandom...I must say that this was an excellent entry point.
Good to see that they have settled and that fate has brought much good to temper the ill times they had to endure. You have woven a wonderful world in these 12 chapters and I'm so grateful that I got to see it come together. It was quite a pretty bow that you wrapped around it with this epilogue.
Possibly a revisit in the future to see these children running and playing and driving their parents mad?
Thank you for letting me get sneak peeks and for introducing me to these characters.
Great job...looking forward to seeing more from you in this fandom in the future. SJ

Such a good and true beginning for an ending to this tale.
They deserve some happiness after everything that they've endured.
I admire her courage and fortitude in not giving up what she fought so hard for. Those bastards deserved to be cut into pieces and fed to the wolves for taking advantage...Arya was right that they would use the opening Sansa gave them to force the Starks into an untenable position. One can only hope that karma comes back to crush their bones and even the score...fingers crossed.
You write intimacy well, my dear. You have a deft touch with the physical side of the coin but without the emotional ties to support them...it's just sex. You don't leave it at that...but instead play the two together to show how enduring and strong their love is. Strong enough to survive a winter apart...and strong enough to keep them both on their feet when most would want to lay down and die...
I've said it before that I didn't know these characters until you dragged me in...but I'm very glad that you did. Thank you for writing this. SJ

Lovely chapter...
Descriptively wonderful as always but here your deft touch with characterization really shines.
You manage to show so much of the motivations and intentions of these characters not to mention their backstory...without having to use ten thousand words to construct that story...it's really a great feat of writing. It was a neat solution to have the dragons become guardians. It's what dragons are known for, after all...protecting or guarding a treasure. While the White Walkers are definitely not riches...no doubt the three will keep watch over them and not let anything pass one way or the other.
I love how you characterize Gendry. I have little experience with him beyond what I've read in fic and the first ASoIaF novel...but you make me want to know him. I'm interested in what happens to him. The same goes with Arya. You've constructed a great tale here...and I'm very glad to have discovered these two and this world through your story. Thank you. SJ

Really enjoyed this story. I'm sad it's ended. You'll have to write another one soon to console me :)
Have a good Xmas!

Perfect ending to a perfectly beautiful story :). Well done dear - and thanks for all the previews! Much love, and hugsssssss.

Enjoyed this very much! Thanks for writing it. ,:-]

I could just picture their wedding and it was the most beautiful thing ever - well done! Great job as always, all we need now is Jon Snow to come back to his baby and all will be tied up flawlessly :) :).

Looking forward to the epilogue. I want to see Gendry lay the smack-down on some Karstarks.