very interesting and creative concept

Sounds interesting so far! Loving it! Please write more when you can.

pls update is really intresting

holy shit i found a fil pjo author

You missed chapter FIVE

the consept and writing is amazing keep it up also percys tank sized hell hound should make an apperance

isnt this supposed to be Chapter 5 ?

I'd let a long,detailed review,but the betery is every second less and less,and I wan to send this,so,yeah,keep with this,I love it.
-M. K. Magnani.

. I thought Paul was being exagetared,but now...A girl who touched other people's hair?Yellow-she-fellow?Well,that's strange.
LOL

Hum...
I don't have an idea of what I should write in this review,so I'm just going to say,I loved this and all that stuff everybody says in their reviews when they don't know what to write but they want to make a review because they liked the !And pleaswe keep writing!I couldn't stand it if you stopped writing this(of course,if you stop writing it,I would understand,though I'd probably feel kind of disappointed).

Hi!
Did you know the word "tantalize" comes from Tantalus,who couldn't drink from the spring his feet were buried in or eat from the tree above his head(you probably already knew the story,but anyways)?
I'm sorry I didn't left a review last chapter,but I wanted to know what happened next,so I decided to let a review when I finish with the last updated chapter(yay)!

Sooo paul's parents are george and martha? ...like, Hermes' snakes?
This is actually pretty fun to read. Keep up the good work :)

This is really good I hope you update very soon.

When did Sally get the Hotch surname?

Where is chapter 5?