What. The. Hell. I'm so freakin' lost. Why is this story so sad. I honestly don't understand the last couple chapters. Things went too fast in this story. Other than that, this is a pretty kick-ass story. Keep writin'.

WHAT THE HAY is going on this story is to hard to follow and it's all over that place I just can't see any of this ever happening .

WHAT THE HAY WAS THAT . Austin's dad is married and works At a mattress store and he would NEVER HURT Austin plus ally's dad works at sonic boom and if Austin was hurt that bad why THE HAY did they go lie around in flowers for an hour it makes no sense and Austin's dad has no tattoos , scars and he diffidently doesn't dink it's all just SO WRONG .

Wait. Did ally think that austin died *.*
I confused... But great story :3

WHY THE SADNESS WHY! **

that made me cry so hard beautiful story i loved it so much keep writing more stories :)

THIS MADE ME CRY BUT IT WAS SO GOOD

Aww Ally died. That is so sad. But at least she to to tell Austin how she felt before she did

Whhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyy?! I'm sad. :( I don't think I can take this pain. It feels like someone reached inside my chest and squished my heart. No I feel like I have nothing left in life. This was an amazingly sad romance story.

I love this story ps the summery way pretty cool

I am balling my eyes out. It's just so sad.

This is soooo sad! I think im about to cry!

I vote for the second one! The one where austin leaves his long time girl fried and falls for the waiter ally

Ally is forced to live with Austin...

Ooh i like the one at camp :))