Reviews for X Men: The (fan fic) Series
Wordcaster chapter 13 . 5/29/2016
"Episodes will return in February. Keep an eye on by blog for more information."
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When is this mythical 'February'? For the love of God when! Your tumblr is just funny marvel gifs. Where the updates at?

Sorry if the review sounds desperate but c'mon, you went and Fox'ed this series when it was getting good. All that set up for the Sinister arc, tension rising, mysteries about to be uncovered and...we'll be back after these messa-NO. Never. We'll be back never. :'(

At least give us an outline of what you had planned for the season. In honor of X-men Apocalypse?
mactraver chapter 13 . 10/27/2015
can you update this is really good and you really shouldn't leave it at this. please. if you may i would love to see more scott angst. I am asking you this cause I don't find many good x-men stories out here but this is one of the thousands out there that I like so if you please could you continue this and if you don't want to I understand because you might be busy or have something else going on in your life. And I'm sorry for making this so long but I just wanted to tell you how I feel and probably some others.
Guest chapter 13 . 12/5/2014
This story is incredible I love the characterisation (Especially your take on Scott; normally I'm not a fan of his but the way you write him makes him - dare I say it?! - sympathetic and likable! Which is a first for me, normally I wanna hit him repeatedly with a blunt object. Also, Rogue is amazing! But that's a given lol I'm totally not biased at all ). The plot is gripping! The pacing is amazing! I enjoy every minute of this story no matter who its focused on (although the B-Hood parts are my favourite). Please continue!
frolicking chapter 13 . 9/6/2014
After reading all of the existing episodes, I really hope that there is more to come. I like your writing style and find it really engaging. I like the development of most of the characters (though personally I am least interested in the youngest X-students). But my favorite are the parts about the Brotherhood (and the one chapter with Remy). I don't find them boring and actually wish that there was more story-time devoted to them. I like the fact that they are well organized and that they aren't just a clueless bunch of misanthropes. But I might be biased, since Rogue has always been one of my favorite characters, and I tend to really appreciate stories that capture her well/the way I imagine her (which means as strong, intelligent, feisty)- I also really like her friendship with Pyro in your stories.
frolicking chapter 6 . 7/24/2014
This was a really well written episode (the previous ones are great as well). I am really loving this "series," which has quickly become one of me favorite fan fictions. The writing is great and I really enjoy the development of multiple characters and storylines. I really hope that you are still writing this!
Lamarquise chapter 13 . 5/28/2014
Please keep writing and post soon; you've really drawn me in!

Just in the way of constructive commentary, it's really cool to have an extended story that isn't about Logan. (Though he's cool when he's just one of the team.) I like the environment we've got going at the school and how characters are gradually coming. Looks like Sinister is due to make an appearance soon. And can I hope we'll get some development with Rogue soon, as she's been static pretty much the whole story and way too loyal to Mystique and Magneto? Dare I hope she'll have cause to reevaluate her views and future? Gambit was cool. You're setting the stage for lots of cool things. I have to admit though: I'm not particularly interested in the Brotherhood and have been pretty much skipping over their sections. And I think they're far too cohesive in your version for a ragtag bunch of mutants who'd have vastly different priorities and agendas and who aren't overly burdened with ethics.
WWMTgirl chapter 13 . 5/3/2014
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I just read through this whole fic and it's WONDERFUL

IT IS A WORK OF ART

I am clutching it to my chest and pretending that it's a TV show funded by Marvel

THE CHARACTERIZATION

THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

THE PoVS BEING ABLE TO HAVE VERY DIFFERENT VALUES AND STILL BE SYMPATHETIC

I love every relationship you've built up because they're all wonderful, complicated and human and beautiful

I already said it's a work of art BUT THAT BEARS REPEATING

I LOVE THIS
Liliththestormgoddess chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
Nice to see Scott and Jean finally taking that step! I can't wait to see what happens with this mutant trafficing ring!
Chellerbelle chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
I liked Logan and Carol's buddy relationship :) You did that well.

I also liked all the "all he could see was red" references, reminding us all of that previous episode. That was a nice touch. ANd hurrah for Jean and Scott finally getting together.

The Acolytes mission was intriguing. I'm looking forward to following that thread further and seeing where it goes. Also, Pyro's call his to his mum was hilarious :)

Jubilee was awesome, as usual. So was Hank. I liked seeing all the power development/testing stuff :)

Loved the stuff with Azazel. I look forward to seeing him call in the favour, bwahahaha.

Great episode!
Anoymous136 chapter 13 . 12/26/2013
How could you leave us hanging like that?! And yay, Jean and Scott get together. I'm glad you didn't make them a Barbie and Ken couple. That's what bothers me avout the interpretataions of their characters. They were too All-American.
ZAHarrow chapter 12 . 12/21/2013
OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. THAT WAS THE BEST PLOT TWIST I HAVE EVER SEEN IN ALL OF MY LIFE. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. AND THE WAY THIS WHOLE EPISODE NEARLY BROKE ME DOWN TO TEARS MULTIPLE TIMES IS JUST FANTASTIC. BUT OH MY GOD THE PLOT TWIST. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. THIS WAS FANTASTIC. I JUST CAN'T EVEN. OH MY GOD.
cilepe chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
Ford Prefect! 3
ZAHarrow chapter 10 . 12/20/2013
This was really sweet. :)
ZAHarrow chapter 7 . 12/18/2013
I'm not sleeping tonight, am I?
ZAHarrow chapter 6 . 12/18/2013
It's damn near midnight, I have two essays to write, and I have to get up at six tomorrow but I can't stop reading! Each time I'm like, "Just one more episode," but then there's a fucking cliff hanger like this one and I have to read the next one. I love these too much for my own good.
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