Ha

Do you think you could do a sequel one shot?

Just like the medic-kits in games, nothing happened here :v

Oh wow. Real smooth Danny. Pretend that never happened. Real smooth. Now, I WANT TO SEE MORE!

Ha! Smooth Danny :) loved it!

I believe that you mean "Today, however, happened to be one of his best entrances ever." And of course, I believe that it should have gone like this: "Two hours later, he was at lunch. After what had happened earlier, you wouldn't have believed it had even occurred. He was in a new set of clothing, and he was talking with his friends as if it was any other day. The most unsettling part of this, was that he was completely healed. Not even the barest of cuts could be seen."

I don't mean to sound cruel or anything; but some of what you wrote didn't make much sense. I'm just offering an honest opinion.

Nice.(: I just think you should try for some more length next time.

aw! I loved it, I like lancer being confused by danny, for some reason, so this really tickled me! as in, I laughed out loud, literally. Short, but sweet. lovely.

Very good one-shot! You may want to check over some of your grammar rules, and instead of using stuff like *FLASHBACK* use stuff like "Mr. Lancer thought back to that morning, which was a strange morning indeed."
And if one of your classmates just dropped down dead, would you be freaking out instead of just staring? And if one of your friends was dying on the floor and just got hit by a knife, would you just let them walk to the nurse by themselves?
All in all, the plot was very good, you just need a bit more rational thinking.

amazing

I wish they would e kept going twitch DP.

Thank goodness for fsnfiction!

Hilarious!

Cool one-shot

No, Something Is Seriously RIGHT With Him. XD

Haha I've always imagined what Mr lancer word think every time Danny comes into class late! :D