Love it. Princess loveless.

I simply can't believe you abandoned your readers just like that!

Even after all this time I just NEED to add this here.
Zero reminds me sooo much of Dante from Devil May Cry so THANK YOU for putting the references in here! Loved them!

Too - As well. ex. 'She, too, was sick' 'He is a ex-human too.'
To - a transition word that has many meanings and uses, primarily as a way of saying that someone/something is changing location, and specifying that location. ex. 'He is going TO the office.' 'I need TO leave.'

This is a really good story, but I've noticed a few errors you have consistently made. Your - belonging to you. You're - you are. Their - belonging to them. They're - they are. There - a word to indicate location. Its - belonging to it. It's - it is. Won't - will/ would not. Want - desire. Aside from there mistakes, which are in most chapters, you also over use and misuse the word 'yet,' and put commas in places where they are unnecessary or even places where they make the sentence confusing. I am really this story, and you have done an amazing job of using proper grammar, excluding the aforementioned mistakes and a few spelling errors. I would not bother telling you of these problems if I believed that your story was hopeless. Thank you for writing this. THIS IS NOT A FLAME.

Okay I'm seriously struggling to finish reading this. Don't get me wrong this is a really good fanfic but seeing Zero go through all that shit and abuse from others who don't accept him really hit me close to home. I am legit crying right now like this fic is really good but my baby Zero needs more love TT

pacifically is incorrect friend it is specifically

I really love this story especially bad ass zero and that kaname is not so arrogant

Wish there was more. Like, what's gonna happen to zero?

Please... update..I already read ten time from beginning ...good story...

I hope you update soon. It's perfect and I want to read more

I really enjoyed reading this story. You should make a split ending. Like a good ending and a bad ending. But the bad ending should be before the good ending. But you could do whatever you want to do.

I am addicted to this story, please continue. It's great and awesome and I hope you don't leave it on a cliffhanger
Please write anything, even if it sucks (which it won't), but just please finish the story, don't end it here

Um...How the hell is Alice the original Vampire Hunter?

Pleas, update. I love the story. Though it has been long since you updated.