This is from 2020 you should finish it

I love the story BTW I know I'm late to everything but ik that you added a lot of stuff to the story to make it original or I guess in a way your own but you mad Finn really weird he saves everyone then turns to a dictator I would understand if he turned Into one and then tked to Jayden and returned to be a fair king pls fix that to make it more like Finn at least pls

porque hombre porque pusiste a marcy con ese capullo cagaste completamente la serie :"v

Hey,
I really enjoy this fanfic, it started off as a usual fan fiction but I believe the story has escalated in such a way that all the fans here get hooked and will sit at their computers for ages, I really do enjoy this fan fiction and I think it is unique in an amazing way, you have created an amazing fan base and I applaud you for your efforts, I can not wait for the next chapter, I hope everything goes well between finn and Marcy,
Kind regards,
A well-wisher.

Dude,you should continue with this fic cause it's awsome in each way.
Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.

Please continue I'm pissed and I want revenge on pendleton and Rebecca was the one who helped Pendleton I know it because I've read a lot of books and that's the path it's heading to

I am loving this story, I hope you finish it in the future

In less words. Good Job, and keep up the good work. Writing is amazing for both writer and reader.

I love this story very much and it has so much detail and story in it, suprisingly I only found out that Bravest Warriors Existed because of this story and I get the vibe that its going with the "Die the Hero or Live long enough to see yourself become the villian" Kinda plot. I hated the fact that Finn betrayed Marceline and she did the same, but it adds to the drama of the story. I just hope Finn gets a Revelation... (Pun intended) ...when this ends and it kills off both Finn and Marceline or something that ends it in the tragic way the story rolls with, but has a climax that doesn't leave the reader dissapointed with a "bad end". This story is amazing either way and give the author my full support no matter what happens from here and I hope they do not give up on the story.

HE CHEATED THAT MOTHER FUDGER CHEATED HOW COULD U U DONT DESERVE MARCY U LYINH DECEIVING UN TRUTHABLE NON BELIEVING BASTARD

Soooooooo does he love Marcy or fp

PLEASE DONT STOP HEEEEEAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR ! I WILL CRY TILL THE SUN BLOWS UP IF U DONT MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER OR STORY... OR WHAT EVER IDC AS LONG AS THIS ISNT THE EEEEEEEEEENNNNNDDD

You know what?Im calling it I bet rebecca is the spy because you never expect the normys to be the one to do shit like read all of lois duncan's books and they always have shit like this in plots and the man always keeps you guessing.

THANK YOU. omg I was so dissapointed when you ended on chapter 13. I thought it was over...

IM STILL MAD BOUT THAT THING WITH BECCY AND FINN! THEY SUCK BEING TOGETHER AND IT WILL NEVER BE A SHIP THAT SHIP WILL CRASH! MARCY PLS BE EVIL FINN SUCKSSSSS GO WITH PENDLETON KILL FINN CASTRATE HIM IDK JUST TORTURE HIMTILL HE BEGS FOR MERCY!

I really hope Marcy has cool powers tho, additional ones like wings like the ukaku one from tokyo ghoul or some other cool power but it wouldnt be super op that she just decimated everyone but yea that's my suggestion and really REALLY HOPE Finn dies XD