What a delightful birthday celebration.

Gorgeous
Thanks for sharing

omg! loved this story it made me giggle.

Hehe. Oh dear. Sherlock is devious.

I love it when they're happy. I can go to sleep and have peaceful dreams. Look forward to the next chapter... No I'm not going to say it...I fought it all the way through this review. I'm not, I'm not, I'm not! I'm just going to say thank you and go to bed, quietly. But... I always thought you had to have dinner before dessert? I'm so sorry...it just had to be said...I apologize profusely. Please forgive me?

Woah! How am I meant to get any sleep with those images in my brain? I have to get up for work in the morning!
Excellent sequel :) I would put in my favourite lines in this review, but that would involve writing the whole lot, so maybe not as my brain just melted. ;-P
John is one seriously lucky bloke!

Looks like John is benefiting from MF's birthday. Nicely done and well written!

Whoa!
So glad you carried on with that!
That was hot!
Whoa!
Holy Johnlock!
IN BED!

hdjfhu ehk bvc a;oixnnm cvnkv nvz;mZ,,...
and that's all i'm able to say...
{it roughly translates to: phwoaaar...}
oh and: thanx love!
another suggestion: Mycroft and his darling Greg... on a Chesterfield... tomorrow...

Now you need to write a piece where they feed one another dinner while in bed! ;-)

Unf. I like how Sherlock thinks.