Reviews for Our Story : The Conflict
Ambassador of the Other Side chapter 15 . 10/18/2018
The beginning of the story was confusing and the order oder of books was weird. I also noticed your inactivity. Other than that, your story was wonderful. I know why you chose to rewrite it. Please keep writing. Please don't give up.
Dendy chapter 15 . 11/16/2015
DON'T YOU DARE DELETE THIS THING OMG YOU CAN JUST KEEP IT AND NOT DO ANYTHINGMWITH IT AND REWRITE IT BUT DON'T DELELET IT!

And no, you're not 'not a very good writer'... I personally can't stop reading this and love this story a lot.. You don't see a lot of pjoxhg crossovers out there, and this one is actually good.

Just wanted to let you know.
Nik1627 chapter 15 . 11/5/2015
No! Please dont just delete the story! I love it!
Angry chapter 15 . 9/16/2015
WHHHHHHHHYYYYYY...
Heloisa chapter 15 . 7/13/2015
Fantastic*
Heloisa chapter 15 . 7/13/2015
YOU ARE FANTASTIC️️️️ You have no idea how happy i am. I seriously love you right now
Heloisa chapter 15 . 7/6/2015
I didn't give up on your stoty so don't give up on me, on us... Your fanfiction is fascinating and creative please continue
xenomorphhuntr65 chapter 15 . 7/3/2015
Ok man, get it together. Its summer now, so start fucking writing. You haven't updated in six months, and the last 3 updates were authors notes. IM pretty sure Im the only one who still cares about this, including you, and that makes me sad. when I get sad, I get angry. When I get angry, I tend to blow things up. You don't want to see me on the news, do you? So get it fucking together! Even just an authors note every week, telling us(me) how your doing on the rewrite and what happened and stuff will tremendously help.

PM me at ,

-Xeno
Heloisa chapter 15 . 7/3/2015
Why don't you just update? I really want to know what happens next, this fanfiction is terrific please update soon and answer me why you are not updating
Heloisa chapter 15 . 6/16/2015
Please update soon! This fanfiction it's just perfect
I Know you can update i believe in you , you are brilliant, you just created a perfect crossover, please continue!
Xenospartan653 chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Cmon man. At least another authors note. You havent updated for THREE FREAKING MONTHES. My spartans are climbing into my Hind attack choppers, waiting to storm into your house at my command.
Guest chapter 15 . 5/18/2015
Yay! Bautistas finally awoken from his College-induced slumber!
*Puts spartan cloak and AK-103 back in closet*
Now I dont have to wake him up!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/28/2015
Good story line but your writing suck.
Sincerely some douche who has nothing better to do then flame
PS. Katcy for the win you can kill wise girl off for all I care
Guest chapter 15 . 1/27/2015
Good luck with your classes.
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