Continue please porfavor. By the way, I love both Jak and Link though I know Jak better I still like both. You did real good on the fight scene that ,personally, is the hardest to do so good job.
Mary Mcfarlin.

Hey this is haley I.m a jak and dexter fan as will as the legend of Zelda and I love this and sure it was bit out of control laughter the fact that jak and Dexter kept calling Link a eif a

Hey this is hal

Update this please

Well I'm impressed I also like what you did with Jak's Dark Eco form it's… was interesting hope you update soon also is this taking place during or post Skyward Sword and post Jak 3

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I like this story I hope you continue.