I actually really enjoyed it I love the idea and the story line you've created although the writing could use some slight work I wouldn't want you to change the way the first chapter is written cuz I enjoyed it to much hopefully you'll continue it can't wait to see your next chapter and how you'll continue from here

keep writing

This is fucking amazing. I just... I can't stop laughing. Please continue

this is a nice little story you got here! (but i kept forgetting ed was a girl! O.O) keep it up!
BTW i found this while looking for hetalia fanfic VEPASTA

2 words HELL YA

What an honor. The biggest insult ever made to me made an appearence.

that's a mighty fine deal

Hmm. I get the feeling that Envy's going to play the role of protective older brother when he finds out that Greed's interested in Eden. What about Izumi? Wouldn't she be one of the people that know about Eden's true gender? Hope to see Lust soon.

I really like what you have done so far, and I hope that I will be able to read the next chapter soon!

... Wait a minute. Wouldn't Izumi be one of the people who know that "Ed' is really a girl? She IS their teacher, and I am pretty sure that she's notice things about Eden as she grows up.

So far, I like what I've read. Just try not to make Eden too Mary-Sue, and everything will be fine. I hope to read the next chapter soon!

I'd read it. It sounds interesting!

I like the idea and would love to read it

I say: go ahead and write this. It outta be a good addition to the Fem!Ed fics out there! But try not to make Hikari seem too Mary Sue, and I think you'll do fine. Greed should learn about "Ed's" true gender with scenario B.
I'd read it.

You're going to tell us how (with the exceptions of Pinako & Winry) found out that "Ed" was really a girl?

Good!Truth, huh? Always thought that "he" was a neutral faction in the series. But your story, do whatever you like with it! Oh, one more thing. Don't kill Lust (aside from Envy & Greed) she's my favorite homunculus!

Does Hikari (Fem!Ed) care that Greed's a homunculus?
Also, this sounds sort of Mary Sueish doesn't it? If you are going to name a character the name really can't be Hikari in FMA because Ed (even if Fem) has to have a European name (Amestrian). Anyway, the story ideas are a little unclear. But none of them seem that interesting. I'm just trying to help. Have a nice day.

o.o Ill definitely await this one.