I have for to tell you I have re-read this story quite a few times. And by a few time I mean a while bunch. I absolutely love the story and I have been on pins and needles for more.

Oh I wished there was more to this. If you ever pick a story back up maybe this one? I really enjoyed it.

Plz update im just dyin 2 no what happens nxt

Holy shit. That was... Wow. Choooo why didn't you continue this? It's a crime against nature!

Well that was fun~ now all I gotta do is finish rereading Chocolate Love and I'll be good!

I forgot there was another chapter lol and I was all ready to move onto the next fic in line! Chooo, you're killing me!

Amazing! I love it a lot! Please continue soon!

ugh I want more! Such a cliff hanger, I can't wait to see what happen's next and Ichigo's father's reaction to all this.

babies bein made by ichigo, awkward but i still love it

Oh, it's been a long time since I was left hanging on one of your cliffs, Cho. This is such sweet torment. I'll have to pacify myself with the excitement of what I know you've decided to update next, because if you stick it out, I'm so much more excited and anticipating THAT update... Just by virtue of what I know it means, ultimately. Don't forget this one though, dear... There is much, much more to be told here! Thank you for such a good read today.

This is really good, Cho. I love this story, it's been so interesting! So tumultuous. Thank you! I can't wait to get to the next chapter!

Ooh, the mystery deepens! Loved this chapter. Shiro x Ichigo are so good together, you write them so well, clearly your OTP. Why was Goat-Face so shocked, though? Shiro seemed to be under the impression that this was information that he would have known, unless Daddy was just messing around... Clearly, he senses there's a change coming on... On to the next chapter!

Best story of this pairing ever :)

Beautifully written and frighteningly erotic chapter. Thanks for sharing with us!

Oh, Chocolate dear... You never disappoint, do you? For not having started out as very much of a Yaoi fan, you're doing a fine job of converting me, lol. Even the darkness, the non-con themes... I'd wager you could transcribe the New York Phone Directory, and I'd be hot and bothered after reading your version. This was delicious, as always. I'm afraid to read too much more, like an addict with a limited amount left in their stash, you know? I don't want to run out of your stories too soon... It's
so strange to me too, because my own work is
generally very tender and loving, and you have
such thick, dark themes, but there's some
quality in your writing that calls out to me...

You deserve a thousand rewards for this master piece that is still in progress. I find it incredibly beautiful and shows the most in depth relationship between Ichigo and his inner self. I like how you show the mental and sensual feelings of the orange-haired teen. You didn't keep it simple with saying he was just 'upset' or 'angry', and instead you went above and beyond in writing this and I thoroughly read this twice and made two observations while doing so.

During my first read, I just went along for the ride in this continuing journey and enjoyed the interactions and drama that happened during each chapter. I loved it when Ichigo had to get help from Urahara since it showed the strain and exhaustion that the Substitute had been dealing with. (I'm also in love with the humor during that situation; so excuse me while I chuckle at the sly Urahara's actions portrayed so perfectly).

The second read was truly a trip for me this time because I began to understand everything that Ichigo was going through and even had a few tears when Juha Bach made the poor boy's world flip multiple times. You made me enter a whole new universe and as if I was watching a Five-Star movie that was to remembered for the ages.
So, please update when you have the time, dear?