it's like Byakuya becoming out of character just for Ichigooo
so sweeeeettttt... lovelyyyy

owwwww...
so cuteeeee. it's like Byakuya becoming out of character just for Ichigooo...
lovelyyyyy

Uhh well that escalated quickly kinda OOC and I aren't that fond of yaoi cause its kinda *cringe* weird and embarrassing for me to read no offense to any yaoi/yuri fans or bent arrows(people who like like people of the same gender) so yeah I'll have to say in my honest opinion that it was all right I guess but hey I know it's hard to write a character in character specially if those characters somewhat dislike each other or have a complicated personality you did okay I also write characters somewhat OOC and mostly write parody so this is just my opinion but I'm pretty sure the yaoi fans will enjoy it so don't let my review get you down show your opinion show it don't be afraid of critics or haters are gonna hate so show them what you got you can't make everyone happy even the best Fanfiction has some unhappy reviewers so I hope you have a good day if your still on here in Fanfiction and your story was alright ,bye bye sincerely, 13

I really enjoyed this keep up the great work

'Let me see the sunset yada yada' renji walks round the corner :-D

Ichigo and toshrio next. I love the way you write. It's awesome.

Oh my, that was cute ;)

Cute little story :p
Thanks !

***Pyrane***

Amazing! I love it a lot!

A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!

Byakuya is just so sweet. Never would have imagined Ichigo to be an intelligent type. Kudos

Awwww

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... For some reason, I didn't expect that ending... At all... I like it though! Love the insight of Ichigo's intelligence, I never thought of it like that... Thanks for writing and posting, and keep it up!

That was just pure genius and amazing. The thing that I really favored in this particular story was that byakuya and Ichigo didn't dance around each other or sprout romantic shit. Thinking "oh I love him so much what'll i do?" Or "my heart beats so fast when I see him" it was respectable and they came to an agreement on their own. You really got their characters perfectly and even added a bit of your own which was great. I especially liked how Ichigo said he'd rather be what people see him as instead of show the real him every time. Once again I enjoyed the subtle romantic assaults and the ending was great. Over all I think you did an amazing job and continue writing. You have a true talent and a unique way of forming your thoughts into a story.

Wonderful, I really like it and I wanted to more, but there is nothing more of it ( please write more bya x ichi fic )