Reviews for Sequel of Welcome to Wool's Orphanage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still it's a pleasure reading your work. I did enjoy it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry mate. I hate to say this, but I agree. This story is getting nowhere. On the plus side you started good. I like the things on the orphanage. But after that things just got messy and seemingly unorganize |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I saw the names, Tom and Harry together, it reminds me of Tom and Jerry almost instantly |
![]() ![]() i understand until this chapter it fells like a lot of one shots, amazingly, funny one shots, i love it really... but i think hharry should reclaim his galleon or at least half of it. |
![]() ![]() what the heck...sorry in this chapter i need answers, what with the parsel tongue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! The minions of Grindwald! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well it looks like the beginning of Grindelwald in England. I expect that when Abe finds out who these people really are, Harry will get his wand back pronto. |
![]() ![]() The sudden time jump of the last chapter left me a bit perplexed, and honestly I can understand not remembering the details of theory after years, but an Auror who cannot perform a simple first year charm correctly is unbelievable. On another note, I like the relationship between Harry and Tom, though I would have liked to see it developing from when they were younger - the previous chapters. I know it's been a while since you last updated, but please consider writing more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Abandoned? Plz no |
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![]() ![]() Loved this! Tom's adorable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() If they are to be in the same year in Hogwarts, Tom would be older than Harry; he'd turn 12 in December of his 1st year (same case as Hermione who spent most of her 1st year as 12 year old because her birthday is on 19th September) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If they are to be in the same year in Hogwarts, Tom would be older than Harry; he'd turn 12 in December of his 1st year (same case as Hermione who spent most of her 1st year as 12 year old because her birthday is on 19th September) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see that Tom has figured out that the Wizarding world has not made it out of the 18th century. |