Reviews for Unnecessary Roughness
SharonE68 chapter 7 . 5/21/2018
Another great story...you grab my attention and hold tight until the end.
Thanks for sharing.
sandipi chapter 7 . 2/8/2018
I was in the Navy and sailor is more PC. Seaman got semen references and seawoman comments. Trust service people to take anything to it's most basic point and jump on it. There may be other reasons I don't know.
LadyDrak75 chapter 7 . 10/10/2017
Good as the last one was!
Guest chapter 7 . 9/11/2017
A seaman is coast guard because they are mainly on the coast whereas a the navy uses sailor as in deep water sailor
pianomouse chapter 7 . 3/14/2017
Loving Tony's team mates, looking forward to seeing how living with Gibbs works out. Thanks for sharing this I am having a blast with your stories.
Seren ferch Dafydd chapter 6 . 2/27/2017
Love the story, but you do have one minor error as Homeland Security cannot actually deport a naturalized US citizen. It would take a trial before a Federal judge showing that Ziva had obtained her status as a Permanent Resident Alien [i.e. Green card] and later citizenship by fraud. Ziva was granted a Green Card as part of a deal with the State Department in exchange for intelligence on Mossad and Israel.

Of course that doesn't mean Homeland couldn't try to do it, just that they couldn't succeed.
Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 5/8/2016
Good story.
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 5/8/2016
Good idea.
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 5/8/2016
Hospital food is bad. Some hospitals are hiring chefs now.
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 5/8/2016
Go, Digimon.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 5/8/2016
See Abby still hasn't learned a thing. Ziva is definitely having difficulties.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
Abby needed the reprimand regardless. She can be excited without hugging UNTIL she finds out what shape AJ is in.
willowtree chapter 7 . 3/25/2016
Total pedantry here, but the saying 'you have another thing coming' (~1895) actually predates 'you've got another think coming' (~1905). The second very rapidly overtook the first in terms of popularity and the first is only recently making a comeback. 'Think' does seem to make more logical sense, but 'thing' makes a more grammatical sentence, and it's very difficult to hear the difference when spoken aloud. At this point, we just have to consider it to be a regional variance.
Amberle-chan chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
I'm really enjoying "Tony as a SEAL" stories. They're well-written, and I love everyone's interaction. However, I'm wondering what the "Spartans" are, and what the coins and sponsorship have to do with them. I hope you can let me know!
bobdog54 chapter 7 . 10/11/2015
Excellent story! Read like you were a SEAL in another life. I enjoyed the evolution of Digimon and Gremlin. Remy and Elmo are super. I love their pragmatic way of looking at life and AJ.

Thank you for a great series
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