...I'm sad now. But good job, really good job. Now be cheerful and update your other stories! And by others stories I mean Over the Rainbow 2 Toil and Trouble. Now. Please?

That was so mean of you!
Oh my god!
Nooooooo! JOHN!
Sorry, had to get that out.
Wonderful writing, even more wonderful characters, even more wonderful plot. I loved it. I lived every bit of pain it gave me, too.
BUT I WANTED THEM TO BE REUNITED AND KISS SO MUCH!
Sorry, that just slipped out.
Kudos for a great job :)
(perhaps you could write an alternative ending with John coming back after Sherlock's already in consulting-detective-ness business?)
Into my favourites, so I could read it and cry whenever I feel sappy.

You evil, evil person. Although it is my fault to decide to read this. The writing is good. Real good. Maybe angst should be your thing. And make sure to make it real angsty. ;-)

WHAT

NOOOO
NO
NO
NOT OKAY

Very well done, and heartbreaking, too.

Perfect. I don't think anyone could have done it better. *feeling sad* great story, perfectly matches the song.
Teshka, author on fanfiction

This was magnificent! I was crying the whole time I was reading it!