Very nice. I loved it, especially the end... I have one similar but not a RoyEd one. Bravo, for the awesome work. Had a smile on my face the whole time reading it.

That was awesome

Reading this at work was a bad, BAD idea... It was so amazing! I went through so many different feelings reading this and then the END that was so unpredictible! Roy was such an ass though XD and ohhhh I loved the opening SO MUCH
thank you for sharing this!

The smut plus the plot twist was perfection. Bravo!

PLOT TWIST!
love it

Hello, but I do not like mess siblings or friends, especially since my favorite couple is RoyxEd , I can not see another couple, in this combination, Ed liabilities hundred, sometimes as Roy and Ed the same, that few are romantic, and silly, and I wanted to see the POV of Roy more, to see if there more action between them, I hope they do more fics, keep it up, thank you and kisses.

LOL I love the ending to the story. And the pick up line Roy used and the one Ed countered with. Great stuff here. Great stuff.

Oh my Gate, I love it 3

Was not expecting that but i loved it!.great job!

OOOOOOOHHH! I definitely was NOT expecting that! Awesome twist... It was hot and then all cute at the end:) hahaha loved it!

This was absolutely amazing, loved it! You did a fantastic job :)

Oh my god, you are so clever my dear. Absolutely loved this. Giggled my head off when they got applauded afterwords. Sorry I don't have time to review on LJ anymore. Just have to make it through this last school year and then I'll have more personal time. Glad you uploaded here though! It went to my e-mail and I was like hey, this is a good chance to let you know I'm still keeping up :)

As usual, you deliver a wonderful little story that has the personalities of Ed and Roy and still make them seem real and alive. Brilliantly done. Thank you.

I like how we didn't know Ed and Roy actually knew each other until the end. Very good!