A bit dry dialogue wise, other than that...Clear! I love you~

please

This was really good! I liked your writing a lot.
Gosh I wish mink's route ended like this xD mink was terrible. He needed some sense beat into him.

I love this...3 really awesome. Should make another chapter but up to you. :D

OMG! This is really well done! I LOVE IT! You did an amazing job with the route cross over. I had a really hard time with Mink's route so I'm happy that Clear sent him running. I mean yeah I get the deal with Mink at the end and I don't think he is such a bad guy but I'm not sure I can forgive him for the things he did to Aoba. *cries* So YES, THANK YOU for writing this! I just LOVE Clear he is my favorite. He's just too cute for his own good and when you had him saving Aoba just had me squealing and fangirling.

Amazing! I love it!