I loved it! For a first fan fiction it is very good andd whilst I am not an ardent shipper of Whouffle (being a Rivex11 fan myself) I thought it was sweet, adorable and well written. I hope you write a lot more and have followed you to make sure I don't miss out! You got the character's down to a T and I loved the TARDIS bickering, she does deserve respect!

A beautiful fiction, I like it !
You're a good writer, don't stop to write, please ! :p
Bye !

This story was so cute!

awww this was really sweet :) I think you did very well with your English, a few things were a bit off but all easily understood.

omg it's awesome! it's so sweet I want this to happen! well done!
btw the image aww I love it so much it's my desktop bg my favourite whouffle fanart

wtf is that I can't log in noo I want to follow and favorite