oh mother bloody hell what the bloody hell my gosh woah what.

Literally all I thought the whole way through was how insanely hot that was. There are no words for how brilliant a writer you are. I must have died half way through because I had to keep rereading lines to make sure I read that right. My heart is literally beating out of my chest. You, mannnnn, you are insanely talented. thank you thank you thank you for this. BEST THING I HAVE EVER READ EVER. Even though I nearly screamed when it ended without any explanation about what happens with them now, you were right to end it like that. Really heightened the story. I would LOVE a second chapter, but I totally understand if you'd rather not. But seriously. I think I love you. Their characters were perfect, sweet, sexy, thoughtfful, wonderful. There was just enough mention of their past for it to really get my emotions, but not too much as to distract from the story. You have SERIOUS talent. I hope you know that.

Of course now I have been rambling and I'm sure I look like a creep, but YOU ARE THE BEST NEWSROOM FANFIC WRITER OF ALL TIME. The end. x

Hot damn, that was hot! I want this to happen on the show! I want McMac sex on the show! Just like this! Thank you so much! I will send you more magazines if you write more fics like this. xD

:) lloooooove it :)

Phew! Hot! And totally in character. The little snippets of dialogue seem exactly what they would say. I love the moment with the change in height when Mac removes her shoes! And I love the ending. Aww. More The Newsroom fic from you, please. Thank you.

This story is so intense you can almost taste it and so well written! It's what I could see happening on the show while the credits are running and the camera's faded to 's the kind of story I love to read even though it hurts like h*** to take in the words because I don't like seeing Mac vulnerable and in fear like that. Beautifully painful with a hint of hope of a happy ending. Thank you for sharing! I love it!

That was... perfect. Sexy, and moving. And I want more. I love your writing style.

LOVED it. I'm so glad you've started writing for The Newsroom! I was such a big fan of your Lie To Me fics. :)