I absolutely loved this, and I was so gutted you didn't continue it! I went over to the original and read a bit of that, up to chapter 9, but it really isn't the same when it's not these two, so I thought I'd leave it here.

Great writing though. Belle is an absolute idiot, causing all her own grief through self-conciously thinking she knows best for people. But Still a good read. Thanks!

I’ve read your story at fiction press
I loved every word the characters,your writing style just everything except that it’s over
Your other reviewers feel it’s incomplete is it
If so will you write more I’d love to know how Carolyn is and if they all go to Ireland and if Quinn calls Jack dad

So sad you didn’t continue here it was great

Holy cow that was intense! But I am so happy Bella is growing up and maturing, I know she has too now but I’m happy she is. I’m sad that they hurt each other so much that they can’t even be friends! I know your continuing as an original story but I’d love to see how Bella ends up! Great story, thanks for writing and sharing!

How do I get a copy of your Let Your Light Shine and A Life Extraordinary? I've read them before and loved them

Pride...

Wow what a sad story but with a flash of hope.

I just read the story on fictionpress. What u've wrote so far is perfect. I truly hope u update soon

I'll read it now and in my mind...it will be bella and edward :)

WOW. I'm speechless. Your an incredible author.

So gutted to read this especially after reading the first chapter. Hoping that your original work isn't too far off what I've read already. Definitely going to Google you lol. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Omg! I picked this story up a few days ago and I'm in love with it! Or, should I say that I'm obsessed with it! The development is so amazing to watch and then bam! The cliffhanger happened. Oh geez, Katie found nail polish in Jack's truck. I really hope that you'll update soon as I see last update was in June or July. Just wanted you to know that you've got a fangirl here waiting for an update .

This was my favorite story in the Contest. Wanted to see it continued.

I was reading on another site (maybe it was Fiction Press) - love it - but I like to copy each chapter and put in a word document to print and I read later when not at a computer. It would not let me do that. I am extremely happy to see it here.
Thank you.

I just finished reading all 20 chapters over on FictionPress. This is a terrific story and should have triple the number of reviews. I tried to leave a review on FP but kept getting kicked out so will try another day. I love your characters and look forward to more. Not sure we'll ever get the usual HEA but hope happiness in some form comes to the 3 main characters. Thank you for writing this.