Reviews for All You Never Say
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28
This is actually making me cry, Andromeda's letter was so beautiful and ugh the sisterly love between Narcissa and Andromeda just gets to my heart. Your writing is amazing; you've made this flow so well and so beautifully and my biggest complain is that I want this to be a novel sized story so I can lose hours and hours in reading it.
Joie69 chapter 1 . 5/30/2019
Hi ! Thank you for this OS, I loved it, Lucius is really really cute !
Would it be okey for you if I translate it in french ? We don't have that much Lucius/Narcissa in french and I would like to add more stories of this ship !
Thank you anyway,
Bye,
Joie
margiesabina24 chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
This is so sweettttttt!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/29/2016
OH MY FUCKING GOOOD ! This one shot, is just incredibleeeeee ! It's so beatiful ! I'm crying
Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 9/15/2016
Aw that's super cute!
ImanSlytherin chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
One of the best I've read so far, the characters were covered in such a way, it's- I can't find the right words, but it's a positive speechlessness! you go!
Veridissima chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
So beautiful... and sad - really like how he tried to comfort her and make her feel better, being able to see beyond his ideals
Ohhh... the thing with how you say "i love you" to someone, and their parents' answers was heartbreaking
LOVED IT! PERFECT!
Naisa chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
That was really sweet. I loved the emotions Narcissa felt for her sister and for Lucius, and the ending was great too. And I wouldn't have noticed English wasn't your first language, your spelling and grammar is better than many whose English is their native language!
Great work :)
NimbusCentaur chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
I love this! It really has the potential to become a multi-chaptered fic... Great writing! I would love to read more Lucissa that you write.
Ricke chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Perfect.
Susan M. M chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
Not bad. Good portrait of a young Narcissa and Lucius, and fewer grammatical errors than most native speakers of English.