Good story.

I, like you, am glad it is over. What a terrible story! You really made me cry during the whole thing. So you did a very good job of touching my emotions (what a good author does when using his or her words to reach out to her readers). I am impressed with your talent, but please don't write anything like that again! I must now find and read a most cheerful story to remind myself that they are only literary characters that I care about.

This was a really good story.

This is oddly disturbing but good at the same time. Although I'm glad Bella didn't kill herself in the books, it seemed like a possible consequence at the time. You wrote it very convincingly. I also liked how Edward was punished.

What a gut wrenching experimental take on NM. Very canon plausible, right down to Alice way of "saving" Edward from taking his life. I love finding new Twilight authors with a mature writing style. Thanks for sharing! Eager to go read more from you. :)

oh wow...beautifully written, but absolutely heart breaking. I'm crying as I type this. Thanks for sharing though. Wonderful writing as always.

Man, reading about Bella's death made it feel like my heart got lodged up into my throat. :/

Good job on writing the story, though!

Golden Eyed Writer

I think he should kill himself. Maybe they would be together in afterlife.

This is devastatingly powerful...as someone whose husband died (albeit not a suicide) young, this resonates with me...for more than a year after he died, I was Edward...living, but not much else. In fact, I'd say I was existing.

Wow! That was so, so sad! I usually hate reading character deaths( especially Edward & Bella) but that was powerfully written! Thank you!

*Sob*
I wish Alice could have seen all of this, in this detail, while Bella was still alive.
Very touching, thank you.

Jimminy Cricket but that was painful. You have taken stabbing with your penmanship to Olympic levels here.

Mia

Very well written.

That was heartbreaking.

Wow, how depressing !