Poor Cerena, but it's kinda her falt at the same time... hard to be who she is!

The little scene at the end made me laugh, that's so funny!

Oooooooooooooooooh... nooooooo

This is so cool to see everything you imagined for this new orc society!

Hahahaha, hot springs, the best!

Wouuuuuuh, so interesting! I'm so eager to read more and more!

Wouhaou... at first, with the description I thought that Vischt was a half-blood, orc and elfe, or somethinf like that.

But he is more, he is a orc prince, that is so interesting!

Changed into an orc, that's something i've never seen!

And that's so cool!

Hello!

I just stumble on your fanfiction now, and I am so excited to begin! The way that Gandalf is coming to our world is very new and refreshing!
I'm really excited to continue!

That's kind of funny, because i'm writing a fanfiction too, about a girl falling in middle earth, but in Isengard with orcs, and she's black too, haha (but it's in french!)

So, among the defeated forces, how are the Half-trolls, Ologs, Snaga, and Mewlips faring?

What happened to the Ologs? Are they counted among the Uruks and spared?

What a roller coaster ride that chapter was!

I wasn’t expecting Cerena to die! That was really shocking. Then with the help of Gandalf and mîrlen helping she came back and had the choice of the Peredhel from Mandos though in reverse. Now my question along time made in a previous chapter was answered! She is counted as one of the Eldar now!

Nelly and Ava are great nicknames! One thing I think would be interesting is if they stayed at the way to the age where Cerena came from and she got the chance to introduce her parents in the future to their grandkids. Would be interesting.

Anyway, great chapter as always! Congrats on almost being done with this story! :-D

I honestly love how you navigated this chapter. I get how people could think it's a bit Mary Sue, but personally I agree with you and I think it was the right choice. Plus it would just be super mean to Elrond to have him lose a second wife. I'm going to miss this story when it finishes, I've loved reading it.

Miss them already? Damn, I hope the kids got the immortality too, from their father if nothing else. Must be pretty nerve-wrecking if there is no certainty if they are mortal or not.

About the Elf missing teeth: do they normally grow back for them in your story? One would think healthy Elves have some regeneration, eternity is an awfully long time to spend with chipped or missing teeth...

I found your story yesterday and spent the whole day up to now reading it. (After sleeping some, of course.) I’m not sure how I felt about all the swearing and the over-sexualized elves. That said, I’ve enjoyed the story so far. I appreciated the themes of mercy and compassion throughout and I especially enjoyed the creativity and originality.