Reviews for Thunder
BlackCherryCookie chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
Oh my... thats the sweetest and fluffiest thibg i have ever read! And i... love this piece soooooo much! This really is so cute...
(I don't like that aerith and zack thing... but that doesn't matter cuz i am sooo glad i Could read such a great Axel x roxas ff! Thanks for that!
SoulSoprano chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
Dadada... cute, sexy...
and i cant believe you made axel scared of squirrels...*dies from attempt of holding in laughter*
hnnn. i wish i was roxas.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Aww wasn't that cute kinda...well actually maybe more on the steamy side!
Kawaii uke27 chapter 1 . 3/16/2014
whenever there's a thunder storm I will always think of this. *-*
Guest chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
I love the story!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
Fantastically hot!
Kunoichi21 chapter 1 . 8/28/2013
I love your steamy lemons, but one thing you might want to work on is changing things up, because otherwise, people might feel like they're reading one lemon all the time. Just a word of advice from one author to another! (:
Reviews to Master chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
*dies*

Two words: Adorably. Smexy. Hotness.

*counts fingers; nods* Yep. That's right.

Awesome one-shot. Lah-Lah-Lah-Lah-Laaaaahved it!
HolleringHawk65 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Another great story! I'm kind of jealous ;)
Anon chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
That was an amazing story! The plot was incredible! Keep up the amazing work!
fanfictionlove900 chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
He just wanted to cuddle with Axel, go to sleep, then wake up and have more sex. DELICIOUS...

I really like your writing. It's sweet and funny and tender. Poor little Axel. I'm so glad you gave him Roxas and his family to take care of him. What a sweet friendship you gave them. Another great job!
Dying Reader chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Oh, my gosh! Really loved your story! It was so sweet and firey (see what i did there) that i lived up to my name and also died a little on the inside from pure joy! Its a good kind of death :) It was exactly the roxas and axel story i was looking for! Keep up the good job!