Reviews for ALS2: Camping Trip
ginabowman2005 chapter 23 . 8/11/2018
I think this is one of the absolute best VA stories I've ever read. It was so good.
ginabowman2005 chapter 22 . 8/11/2018
I cannot laugh anymore! My tummy is SOOOO SORE! from laughing so hard. I can see Lucy/Lissa going up to Abe and doing that, and I can see his face turning white and his need to get away taking over. I can see Adrian wandering around doing that, he's such a character! Then Zoey/Rose, OMG! "You're one of THEM!".

I haven't laughed this much in...I can't remember the last time I spent hours laughing so hard.

I love the fire and Spirit scene. That was truly an amazing piece of writing. It touched my heart when Janine was telling them about their Spirit animals. What an amazing story.

I wish I had visuals of Adrian, Sydney, Abe, Janine, Vika, Niko, and Mikhail. I wish they'd have announced the actual cast of actors for Frostbite at some point so we'd have that.
ginabowman2005 chapter 21 . 8/11/2018
Again, you write such funny material!

I don't know if you'll see this or not, but did you finish your book?
ginabowman2005 chapter 20 . 8/11/2018
OH MY~ Poor Dimitri. Sister's and girlfriends can have so much fun when you're asleep.

I had a hard time reading this chapter. Some friends of mine went fishing/camping, guys weekend, and a storm came up. They're from Tornado Alley so they didn't think anything of it. The storm was bad, their camp got hit by a tornado. They didn't come home.

So this storm in tents was hard for me to read. But you did it very very well.
ginabowman2005 chapter 19 . 8/11/2018
That was SOOOOO FUNNY! I loved it!

I laughed so hard I woke everyone up and the tears running down my face really confused them.
ginabowman2005 chapter 18 . 8/11/2018
I LOVE this chapter. Finding out SOOOO many interesting things...lol.
ginabowman2005 chapter 3 . 8/9/2018
This is so fun, you have a very good imagination.
ROMITRI TOGETHER FOREVER chapter 23 . 8/1/2016
So good ...sooooo hilarious...worth reading..superb.
Kimavinzant chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
I'm literally in tears from laughing so hard!
CheezyLife02 chapter 1 . 7/23/2015
OMG! I laughed really hard, and it is only the first chapter!
VAvixin69 chapter 23 . 6/25/2015
Loved it! And laughed so hard I cried lol!
Rmitri chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
Omg... You are actually very funny... Hit friend is right about that... D
PossiblyOCD chapter 17 . 4/1/2015
Syd/Adrian should have sung sparks fly...
Get me with those GREEN eyes

Great story
alexlc chapter 23 . 1/3/2015
Loved it so much I stayed up ALL night reading until I finished. :)
alexlc chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
Awe so romantic.
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