Really like this.

Aww :) What an interesting idea. I never even thought about Yachiru in that light.

This is going in my favourites! I think it's in character and is in a very different situation than most fanfictions I've read. I like it a lot! It's really unique, refreshing and shows a different side of Yachiru. I'm glad you brought it up and who gets to witness it none other than Byakuya! Love how you made their relationship.

Well written, detailed, and I didn't find any grammatical or spelling errors. Nice job! Keep it up.

THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC! I was always looking for a fic that addresses the point that Yachiru has been the Vice for a looooonnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg time, but they always stick with the "looks like a kid, is a kid" and leave it at that, but thank you so much for FINALLY bringing that up! I love your writing style, your grammar is down to an art, and so I can't wait to read any more of your works!

Once again, if I didn't get my point through, THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC!