Superb!~~~

Here's to a very altered future... no matter who wants it otherwise. Thanks!

hmm. I'm rather confuzled.

Oh, I want more! This is my favorite pairing, screw Torchwood.

So... I want to know what happens next with these three. I want to know what these bonds eventually mean, and how the timelines shift. I want to know what happens on Satellite Five and how this new threesome relationship evolves. I want to know what happens if/when Nine regens, and the results of Doomsday and -

In other words, a sequel would be positively lovely _

Oohgosh.. Was the 9th really like this? I only remember him being more smiley (unless when around Dileks) ..was he always this mad at everyone? He wasn't when he first met Rose. . Gah! Poor River. Now I'm thinking what if he never died and regenerated as the 10th and 11th both times.. It's good... But LOL you just made me not like this doctor.. At the same time I want the 9th even more to be the one who marries River now. XD

Very interesting premise. Everyone was in character. River and Nine's interaction was nice, though River and Jack should have talked a little more. There wasn't much description, mostly just dialogue, but that's not really important in this particular fic. After all, the plot and the appearance of the place are the same as in the original episode and character interactions are the only thing that changes.

I've just revisited this story and realized by now I owe you a review! This is excellent, I love the way you wrote Nine. Even including outright Nine/Rose/Jack (which I do enjoy) this felt very consistent with cannon. And not being a huge River fan, I prefer this sort of side of her when she understands and accepts the nature of non-synced time lines...lovely little bit between her and Jack without diving into River/Rose jealousy. Overall very well done!

Hehe clever! Very clever! Brilliantly written and I loved the difference you made between this and the episode but still keep it to cannon - I loved it

This was absolutely amazing! I loved some of the images that you had in this story, and the dynamic of it. I think you really captured Nine's character well.

This was good, but my absolute favorite part was that little bit about Rose being saved by a man with green eyes. I choked up a little. He saved her even before they started running...

Loved it!

why what happened? you confuse me! and I love it! but golden and blue grey? what? so huh?

Is there more of this? Because I really like the concept. I'm curious to see the shift in timelines from this.

I have to say... this is absolutely fantastic. Its so in depth and you have River and Nines personalities so perfect. Honestly, you even worked in a bit of Jacks family! Jack and Rose married... sounds like those three will be up to no good in the Tardis ;) you worked in so many little details from the show and character traits... gosh, I can't get over how great this was!