If the roles would have been reversed, there would be no doubt that this would be perceived as a sexual assault. A no is a no in all cases.

Oh I really hope Bella takes a lover!

Sorry, but so far Edward seems like a real bimbo. A pretty airhead.

I'm not too far yet, but I'm kind of really disappointed with how Edward has a whole relationship, and yet Bella can't even have a one night stand? why does she have to feel guilty when they made a clear agreement to remain platonic? I'm gonna keep reading I just hope this isn't a "Good girl Bella waits for Edward to notice her" story.

I am reading this story for the second time and it is still a good one to read. thank you for sharing it with all of us to enjoy. The one thing that bothers me the most not only with this story but most all is there seems to be NO PROOF READING AT ALL. you have so many missed spelled words and sound alike words missed used while writing. Just something to think about and maybe correct? Thank you for your time and your writing. 3-28-20

Great story!

I am glad Tanya will be busy from now on. The newlyweds can focus on falling in love. They need it because they are like an old broken in domesticated roommates. I hope you he coming chapters up the romance... I want to fall in love with their love too!

I don’t know why Edward didn’t just bring the stealing to light to James, demand the money be paid back and eject him from the family business. What ever his dealing with guns and drugs was a whole separate issue and had nothing to do with the business.
I guess James felt he should have been put in charge of Cullen Corp. it wasn’t like he was the oldest, right?

How on earth did Esme of all people think that was acceptable? It boggles the mind!

Why the hell hasn’t Edward even mentioned that he broke up with Tanya already? I’m sure that’s why she was even there to begin with. I think it would have made a difference if Bella knew he already kicked her to the curb.

I’m sure Bella will be seeing her family at this charity ball. Where is Bella’s grandfather? He wasn’t at the last party. Why isn’t he calling in his loan? Why hasn’t anything else been mentioned about the business the Swans and Cullens were going to be doing together. It had sounded that mingling with high society was only one of the perks when the marriage was presented.

I was thinking Jacob's secret was that he was gay. Bella than mentioned the attention he paid her and that the kisses and bodily contact was in the grey area so now I’m unsure. Bella did say there was a reason they broke up.
I’m not sure how Edward and Bella are keeping the agreement of being discreet when they are both going out publicly with others.
I bet Tanya is already married.

It’s a good storyline. The script needs a beta TEAM badly. Very poor use of English throughout. I feel like a solid year of language arts might help.

Great story! I enjoyed every chapter. Thank you!

I absolutely loved this story.
I love Bellas wittiness.
The love of family.
I cant wait to read more of your stories.
Tina