Yo sorry for the late review but i couldn't help but notice 1 mistake in chapter 11 nothing major just the word ask is used instead of the word as, it actually confused me a little bit. so if you ever get around to it, please change the word ask to as as it will make it less confusion, where Sam asks max what the lessons they will be going to do will be is where the mistake is located.

Naruto has the sword from Loonatics Unleashed, oh man thats just too good.

Sucks

most people just call it sex I don't think any one says hey wanna go mate

hes even got his own shego

is he related to draken

that was random as fuck and I don't know why they wanted to make him underwear

i do not know if i asked you ,but i was wondering if you could make a naruto x to love ru fanficion. since i do like your storys

you had my attention up until this 'watcher' business, bad idea in my opinion

(star wars return of the Jedi victory theme/force theme/ ending title)

good start

great story.

This is one of the BEST fanfics EVER written

to .3950 One letter difference between their names "Connor" from this story and "Conner" from power rangers. I did find out that there is a sports radio guy named Connor McKnight though.

who is Boris based on? I know most of the bad guys are based off of bad guys from other shows like Kim Possible and Dr. Doofensmerts from Phineas and Ferb and Batman. I remember some cartoon did the same kind of scheme but I can't remember which one did it.